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Happy Valentines Day

Knowing your name will save my life.
Get me out of a whole lot of strife.
     If it would be all the same
     Dearest lady, tell me your name.
Its nice to know the name of my future wife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Narain Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Ha ha, Nice one.
Volumes Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Jay! :)
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 1:39 AM
- Lovely, S.V. - Hope she feels the same and gives him her name...:) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs ?
Volumes Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Thanks lovely Anne- Lise :) Hugs? Oh yes please !
Sharma  Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Oh, I find this take kinda adorable, dear SV, it's so romantic and perfectly fitting for the Valentine's Day ambience.. I love your wordplay here with rhymes and it shows the devotion towards one's beloved, made me go awwwn.. Kinda buttery cute haha! Amazing limerick with interesting flow.. So glad to read your poems and see you posting, sending best wishes for the New Year as well, may it be a beautiful one for you :)
Volumes Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 11:10 PM
Hiya are you this gorgeous in real life? You must be the sweetest 18 year old in the world. I don't say that to embarrass you. Reading what you write makes me smile. You seem to have a heart of gold. Thank you dear one. Your praise is over the top for my lil Limmerick. Bless you sweet one.
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