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Happy Thoughts

bell paper sticks and twine one pair cutting shears to cut the paper and the ribbon add the stix twine an' bell I made a list to build a kite And gathered all them 'round. I worked real hard with all my might (Each piece it's place was found). Bright red as apples on a tree My kite was taking shape; A ribbon tail like daffodils (And bows I had to make). I wrapped the twine around a stick And tied it on real tight... Then took off running up the ditch But, it would not take flight. It did not seem to have the weight-- And then it dawned on me... I had not put the bell in place! That's what it had to be. Faster and Faster...off I ran Higher and Higher...it began Over the house tops and bandstand Flying to the 'Meridian'* Beyond the tree tops and wind-fan* Higher and Higher...off the land Faster and Faster...could not stand Up! Up it took me...kite in hand; Up in the sky...do not know where. I could not see to tell. "Is there anybody out there?" All I hear... is that bell... "Hello... Hello hello hello?" "Tink?"... I was off to 'Neverland'!! I hope I see you there! I'm holding on with both my hands... 'Happy Thoughts' in mid-air! deborah burch© 4/05/2012 *note: wind-fan*: a type of windmill; 'Meridian'*: a planet on 'Deep Space 9', episode 54, that "spends most of it's time in another phase of existence..." It appears in our world briefly, then diappears "for 60 years". These cycles establish less time in our universe until one day they will disappear forever. (much like childhood imagination;dreams and such) I would like to dedicate this poem to 'the class', for they have been the most inspirational and encouraging to me since joining 'the soup'...in so many ways...our journey is just beginning...may we each stay young in our hearts forever...

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Date: 6/4/2012 1:24:00 PM
well written I could image your kite flying over my roof and hear at the same time hello,hello, love it,dear friend,Ivy
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:45:00 PM
This is quite a tale and a fun read. An encapsulated brightspot that leaves you with a smile. This is my type of poem. Huggs TLee.
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:49:00 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite Deb, love this one and congratulations on your winning place xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:15:00 PM
Good to see the win here Deborah, congrats..!
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:57:00 PM
Wow, Deb...you wrote this masterful creation? WoW and WOW! The judges were so delighted that you had your craft store shopping list at the top of your poem...an amazing and powerful touch! Laced with so many creative techniques....My favorite part was you hanging onto the kite as it soared thru the air! Congrats on this golden write. :) Gwendolen
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/15/2012 9:35:00 PM
:O ...thank you sooooo much Gwen!!! what a wonderful honour!! this was such fun to write! Thank you for a great contest,the encouragement and this honour...big hugs, love deb
Date: 4/5/2012 8:47:00 PM
Deborah, i like the way you point that some poems should stay young in our heart..I never made my own kite...((well unless you count a plastic bag with a string tied at the end)) lol..just to see it soar,, I love that place your poem flies up into..Neverland.. what an image.. happy thoughts happy thoughts... love it..always..pd
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/6/2012 4:45:00 AM
Thank you sweet PD :) Life stressors are prone to causing a bottle-neck which blocks our creativity...doesn't mean it isn' t there...it just cain't get out right now...understandable...keep writing...no matter what it is...you can always 'tweek' it later...or use it as a basis for a Pulitzer!! :) much love, deb

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