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Happy Sabbath

H: Here on the earth we are
A: Always busy with
P: People and always at
P: Places that work us to the bone.
Y: You should come away and rest.

S: Stop for just a moment
A: A moment of pause from what wears you down
B: Bask in the rest of your body
B: Bring to life the renewal of the mind
A: Allow for communication with God
T: To give your soul renewed life!
H: Have a restorative day.
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Stark Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 3:10 AM
Beautiful read.
Hawley Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Thank you for that.
Situation Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 4:16 PM
It's a command from a God who loves us.
Hawley Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 4:38 PM
It really is. Thank you for that.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 2:46 PM
so cool how you did this as acrostic. nice seeing you today, Miranda
Hawley Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Thank you. This was an easy write, well mostly.
Baker Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 3:10 PM
A wonderful blessing in the words of your Acrostic poem, Miranda. Great advice and a good way to begin again. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Hawley Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Thank you for that. Have a great day yourself.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 1:17 PM
WOW!!! A lovely Acrostic write. I Love This One. Have a blessed day.............
Hawley Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Glad you like this one. Thank you!
Read Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Amen! well put together Acrostic poem Miranda God Bless.xx
Hawley Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Thank you for that. This one took a lot of thinking about.
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