Happy New Year From the Unicorns

So far I've done everything I could possibly do this year.
I've given thorough thought to cleaning up my act.
These early-day hours have been rough-house
The storm shudders inside me are all grimy, they need tending to,
I just need to find them first.
So tired from last night,
Riding unicorns through the stars.
(No one believes me.)
Trouble is we're all blinking too fast for our own good as it is.
I've done everything I've promised to do this year, so far,
And I haven't even made the promises yet.
That's how interesting I've been lately.
You have no idea how hard it is to be this interesting.
Riding Bellyglow through the thrushes of song birds...
I probably don't know, either.
What a bucket of letters this is.
Thanks for Peking, thanks for Hong Kong.
Happy New Year.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bocsa Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Well done.Beautiful. Delightful.Congrat. A foreign hunter of the same Unicorn. Maybe of some ~common recollections~,too.
Gupta Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 4:25 AM
"The bucket of letters" offers a wonderful and witty poem. All will seek to share the "riding unicorns through the stars" via the moon.
Gist Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Crisp delivery! Beautiful thought process.
Murray Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 6:50 AM
My New Year Resolution is to get fatter. Your poem releases me from my guilt about that.
Turner Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 7:09 PM
I especially like the part where he says, "he's kept all of the promises but hasn't made any yet" (paraphrasing). I do love humor. Nice poem.
Gupta Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Brilliant imageries. Interesting reading. Enjoyed.
White Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Imaginative. Don't worry the clock will change and you will have time to accomplish tasks
Tolliver Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 7:52 AM
I love the poem. Change is not always as easy as people think. Great Write ! I look forward to reading more of your works.
Woodell Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:50 PM
"Riding unicorns through the stars. (No one believes me.)" very good job bringing to life the feeling of the night before and its ridiculousness no matter the reason to kill the pain or escape to the unicorns. hehe. anyway. if im missing the point here please do explain. great stuff here though. WRITE ON! (p.s. i can use actual punctuation and stuff and i do in my own writing i just dont in little internet comments and such **huggles**
Anish Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 7:00 PM
"Storm shudders" - very clever image! Keep riding through the stars! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Brownlee Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Sounds like you are ending the year on an up note. Very cleverly written, but don't pile too much on the last night to complete. Thank you.
Shetley Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 9:49 AM
ah yes, enjoyed this fine stream of conscious thought. The title is brilliant indeed!
A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 7:02 PM
By the way....I love unicorns...pd
A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 7:01 PM
My favorite poem of the year already...lol...love it... tagging it as a fav...thank you for the awesome read...happy day one....luv...linda
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