Happy Mother's Day

Compassionate lovely siren
You didn't keep your silence
Words you utter -  timeless
To you my greatest reliance

Your love as huge as a giant
As your heart immensely pliant
Needless more to secure a license
Evermore you're my loyal alliance

More than a systematic science
Greater than a credible titan
Guarding me not to be frightened
Always my ways you enlightened

More than these
More than a diamond, 
That's how you are 'MA
My dearest Mama
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY.. :)


(c) OLIVE ELOISA
MaY 11, 2014
2:12 AM

DEDICATED TO ALL MOMS.. specially to my MAMA: OLIVIA DOMINCEL GUILLERMO

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/19/2014 7:28:00 PM
No wonder this poem has been viewed 1325 times...it's purity brought a tear to my eyes, for it is so full of love. Yours is a beautiful and vibrant spirit, Olive. Thank you...Keith P.S. About chatting over pizza... :-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/27/2014 11:29:00 AM
oh.. hugs my friend Keith.. I pray that your mom is happy and at peace in God's arms.. :) I know her memory lives in you.. :) and you too keep those poems up high!
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Keith Merritt
Date: 6/20/2014 12:47:00 PM
Child, I feel your pain. My own mother died six days before 911. Please keep these great poems coming.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/20/2014 12:17:00 PM
hahhaa.. :D yes why not if it's possible. :) Thank you Keith.. :) and i too shed a tear when I wrote this as I remember how great is my mama eversince.. :D i miss her so much..
Date: 5/11/2014 3:44:00 PM
Great work honoring your mother and other moms around the work..Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara.. :) GBU always.. :)
Date: 5/11/2014 3:27:00 PM
Olive, this is a lovely poem dedicated to your mother, the love is felt in every word.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Broken Wings.. :) I Appreciate you coming by.. GBU.. :)
Date: 5/11/2014 1:58:00 PM
Dear Olive, Your love for your mother flows beautifully throughout this wonderful poem. My mother's in heaven, but I felt the same way about her. What a delight to read this dedication! Also, thank you for your comment. That was a true story. LOL Happy Mothers Day to you! Love, carolyn
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn.. :) your comments are sweet and kind.. :) as lovely as your picture is. :)
Date: 5/11/2014 1:11:00 PM
you warm my heart as i remember how special my mom was.. miss her, olive.... beautiful!.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:52:00 PM
As Im missing my mom too Nette.. :) weeeeew!!! Thank you for dropping by and leaving your kind comments .. :)
Date: 5/11/2014 8:42:00 AM
Hi Olive, This is the sweetest. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written Poem with us. Peace, Deborah
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Deborah for dropping by.. :) GBU.. :)
Date: 5/11/2014 12:35:00 AM
This poem touches the heart, I loved it!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 1:10:00 AM
Thanks Arthur..:)
Date: 5/10/2014 7:42:00 PM
That is sweet :) very well spoken, hope she has a happy mothers day.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 1:11:00 AM
Thank you. Casarah..:) I hope too cause soon we'll have my sister's baby.. We have been waiting for this...:)
Date: 5/10/2014 6:56:00 PM
Love your mother's day tribute, i'm sure your mother will love this special write you've done for her, great job lady. And also thanks for your comment on my rib and bit write I just wanted to do something different for a change, cheri
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 12:02:00 PM
Thanks for sharing that with us.. :) GBU
Date: 5/10/2014 6:50:00 PM
What lovely dedication my dear...hugs Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/20/2014 12:14:00 PM
Bout time you responded to this one . I was turning blue holding my breath ...lol. ;-P
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/20/2014 12:09:00 PM
thank you Tim.. :D! hugs too
Date: 5/10/2014 6:45:00 PM
Hi Olive: Beautiful words and a beautiful tribute to your mama.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/20/2014 12:13:00 PM
thank you Ralph.. :) this too late thanks.. :)
Date: 5/10/2014 6:32:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute written with real feelings to a special mother! I would like to wish a Happy Mother's Day to Mama 'O' and all the other mothers on Soup :) xxx // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/30/2014 12:45:00 PM
:) thank you so much its just now that i saw your post.. :D
Date: 5/10/2014 6:16:00 PM
There is nothing like the love a mother gives... "Bravo"! PR
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 11:11:00 AM
thANK yOU SO MUCH.. yes yes yes you are right.. :)!!! :D GBU :)
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