Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Quatrain

Happy Mother's Day

Compassionate lovely siren
You didn't keep your silence
Words you utter -  timeless
To you my greatest reliance

Your love as huge as a giant
As your heart immensely pliant
Needless more to secure a license
Evermore you're my loyal alliance

More than a systematic science
Greater than a credible titan
Guarding me not to be frightened
Always my ways you enlightened

More than these
More than a diamond, 
That's how you are 'MA
My dearest Mama
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY.. :)


(c) OLIVE ELOISA
MaY 11, 2014
2:12 AM

DEDICATED TO ALL MOMS.. specially to my MAMA: OLIVIA DOMINCEL GUILLERMO

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Keith Merritt June 19, 2014 at 7:28 PM No wonder this poem has been viewed 1325 times...it's purity brought a tear to my eyes, for it is so full of love. Yours is a beautiful and vibrant spirit, Olive. Thank you...Keith P.S. About chatting over pizza... :-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2014 at 11:29 AM oh.. hugs my friend Keith.. I pray that your mom is happy and at peace in God's arms.. :) I know her memory lives in you.. :) and you too keep those poems up high! Keith Merritt June 20, 2014 at 12:47 PM Child, I feel your pain. My own mother died six days before 911. Please keep these great poems coming. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 20, 2014 at 12:17 PM hahhaa.. :D yes why not if it's possible. :) Thank you Keith.. :) and i too shed a tear when I wrote this as I remember how great is my mama eversince.. :D i miss her so much..

Sara Kendrick May 11, 2014 at 3:44 PM Great work honoring your mother and other moms around the work..Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:55 PM Thank you Sara.. :) GBU always.. :)

Constance La France May 11, 2014 at 3:27 PM Olive, this is a lovely poem dedicated to your mother, the love is felt in every word. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:54 PM Thanks so much Broken Wings.. :) I Appreciate you coming by.. GBU.. :)

Carolyn Devonshire May 11, 2014 at 1:58 PM Dear Olive, Your love for your mother flows beautifully throughout this wonderful poem. My mother's in heaven, but I felt the same way about her. What a delight to read this dedication! Also, thank you for your comment. That was a true story. LOL Happy Mothers Day to you! Love, carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:54 PM Thanks Carolyn.. :) your comments are sweet and kind.. :) as lovely as your picture is. :)

Nette Onclaud May 11, 2014 at 1:11 PM you warm my heart as i remember how special my mom was.. miss her, olive.... beautiful!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:52 PM As Im missing my mom too Nette.. :) weeeeew!!! Thank you for dropping by and leaving your kind comments .. :)

Deborah Shiells May 11, 2014 at 8:42 AM Hi Olive, This is the sweetest. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written Poem with us. Peace, Deborah Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 11:19 AM Thanks so much Deborah for dropping by.. :) GBU.. :)

Arthur Vaso May 11, 2014 at 12:35 AM This poem touches the heart, I loved it! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 1:10 AM Thanks Arthur..:)

Casarah Nance May 10, 2014 at 7:42 PM That is sweet :) very well spoken, hope she has a happy mothers day. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 1:11 AM Thank you. Casarah..:) I hope too cause soon we'll have my sister's baby.. We have been waiting for this...:)

Cherl Dunn May 10, 2014 at 6:56 PM Love your mother's day tribute, i'm sure your mother will love this special write you've done for her, great job lady. And also thanks for your comment on my rib and bit write I just wanted to do something different for a change, cheri Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 12:02 PM Thanks for sharing that with us.. :) GBU

Tim Smith May 10, 2014 at 6:50 PM What lovely dedication my dear...hugs Tim Tim Smith June 20, 2014 at 12:14 PM Bout time you responded to this one . I was turning blue holding my breath ...lol. ;-P Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 20, 2014 at 12:09 PM thank you Tim.. :D! hugs too

Ralph Sergi May 10, 2014 at 6:45 PM Hi Olive: Beautiful words and a beautiful tribute to your mama. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 20, 2014 at 12:13 PM thank you Ralph.. :) this too late thanks.. :)

Paul Callus May 10, 2014 at 6:32 PM A heartfelt tribute written with real feelings to a special mother! I would like to wish a Happy Mother's Day to Mama 'O' and all the other mothers on Soup :) xxx // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 30, 2014 at 12:45 PM :) thank you so much its just now that i saw your post.. :D

Pernell Rodocker May 10, 2014 at 6:16 PM There is nothing like the love a mother gives... "Bravo"! PR Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 11:11 AM thANK yOU SO MUCH.. yes yes yes you are right.. :)!!! :D GBU :)