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Happy Meal, For Fast Food Epulaeryu

I can't wait to unwrap it
The tasty nuggets
The smell, I gotta have it
The greasy hot fries
Box bursting with joy
Oh my gosh
Toy!

April 29th (re-entry)

Copyright © Rachel Bernotaitis | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/7/2011 6:49:00 AM Congratulations Rachel on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/7/2011 2:18:00 AM what a toy; it's a topper rachel! congrats on the highest win! :) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/6/2011 8:35:00 PM I LOVED this one the first time. TOY was what clinched it! congrats. Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 5/6/2011 3:05:00 PM A very clever, enjoyable write. Congrats, you deserve it Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/6/2011 2:28:00 PM Really enjoyed your reference to the "toy," Rachel. Great job here and congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Emma Buckeridge Date: 5/6/2011 12:38:00 PM Congrats on the big win. :o) Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/6/2011 12:32:00 PM This sounds like my grandkids!! Happy Meal time!! :) Congratulations, Rachel!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/6/2011 11:46:00 AM THIS is excellent Rachel.Congrats on your win- Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/6/2011 11:04:00 AM Beautifully done Epulaeryu, liked the surprise of toy at the end.Congrats Rachal on your top place win in this contest. Love, gautami Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/6/2011 7:24:00 AM Dear Rachel- You are officially at the top of the food chain for today! You place first because you captured the enthusiasm of a child as he/she excitedly unwrapped the food....all the way to the toy! You did well-Proud of YOU! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/27/2011 3:18:00 PM this is really really good. the way you rhymed joy and ended with toy. Gotta fave it!! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/26/2011 10:13:00 PM Please add the date and the name of the contest to make your entry official..then hit-resubmit. Again, thanks Rachel. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/26/2011 10:11:00 PM I am honkering for this 33 syllabled-write...what a delight! I am not sure BUT you might be the very first entry in my 2nd poetry contest! I am thrilled that a new young poet has jumped in head first! Love the TOY! Gwendolen Login to Reply