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Happy Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun Didn't turn over Got over exposure White in front but dark on his bum

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/7/2020 11:07:00 AM

Hello Happy Jack, that is what you get when you fall asleep in the sun .LOL! It must be hard to sit down. love Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2020 10:55:00 AM

Hello Happy Jack, I am so glad i made you laugh. love, Darlene. xxxx-oooo Enjoy your day my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 12:45:00 PM

LOL You made me chuckle my love... XOXOX

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/7/2020 8:14:00 AM

LOL! Showing up the neighbours are ya? ~xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 8:21:00 AM

Bum-side up is more respectable! Otherwise...... love Happy Jack XOXOXOX

Michael Tor

Date: 8/7/2020 8:11:00 AM

Jack tis the season for those nasty burns. This one made me smile. Enjoy your day my friend...

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 8:23:00 AM

I was susceptible to those nasty burns! Never did learn! Good morning Michael!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2020 6:41:00 AM

Toasted buns...oh boy! LOL

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2020 7:35:00 PM

Your a nut!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 6:43:00 AM

With loads butter and jam!!! LOL XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/7/2020 6:34:00 AM

Ouch, careful how you sit, don't let the fillies pat you on the rear lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 6:42:00 AM

A lesson to be learned! LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2020 6:19:00 AM

Poor Jacko! Made me laugh Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2020 6:21:00 AM

LOL Always time for a giggle!!! XOX