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Happy Is a Feeling Without a Ceiling

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I find delight in bright stars and moonlight, a cooing dove, and wooing for love 'Happy' is a feeling without a ceiling, can't be bought, is more than words impart It's a smiling child, wild flowers, afternoon showers, and the powers of God above Happiness is pure pleasure, a treasure we can't hide and starts inside our hearts :) August 11, 2017 (: Rhyme Battle: Happiness Sponsor: Juli-Michelle

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/7/2017 1:24:00 AM

Indeed ... indeed. Well-said with wonderful internal rhyme, and I totally agree! Congrats on another win, my friend - blessings! :-) <3

Darren White

Date: 10/6/2017 1:59:00 PM

As always, I admire your internal rhyme, without your poems losing any of their natural flow. Well deserved 2nd place :)

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 10/5/2017 7:37:00 AM

Lovely, much deserved win.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2017 7:43:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Shirley.

Constance La France

Date: 10/4/2017 2:05:00 PM

Lin, congratulations on your win with this beauty !

Lin Lane
Date: 10/4/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Constance.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/4/2017 1:24:00 PM

Lin, I'm sorry for the long wait in this contest, but congratulations on your second place win! You deserve it, a wonderful poem! Love, Juli-Michelle

Lin Lane
Date: 10/4/2017 4:20:00 PM

It's quite alright, Juli. Thanks for the placement.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/21/2017 9:57:00 PM

A delightful poem! It makes very effective use of a simple structure with images enhanced by creative rhymes.i love it. Well done Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you very much, Geoffrey

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/13/2017 6:47:00 AM

Beautiful, Lin, stay happy always:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2017 3:13:00 PM

Thanks, jo.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/12/2017 5:10:00 PM

Well-written, Lin--so much said in just four lines! Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thanks very much, Janice.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/12/2017 4:47:00 PM

I see internal rhymes...cleverly crafted my lady...best of luck Lin...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comments, WW.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/12/2017 5:44:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thanks, Ravi.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/11/2017 11:47:00 PM

Hi Lin, your title perfectly sets off this sparkling gem beautifully. I love it! Good luck in the contest!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2017 7:40:00 AM

I truly value your in-depth comments, Susan. Thank you very much.

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/12/2017 8:55:00 AM

Actually, to be more specific, not only is your title superb in the spirit of the poem, but your poem, including your title, also has greater lyrical depth due to your wonderful internal rhymings and the super smooth flow of well-chosen and well-placed words. These qualities make your poem a sentimental sparkling gem that I enjoy reading over and over again! :) :)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:29:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Susan. I'm glad you pointed out something you specifically liked.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/11/2017 9:25:00 PM

Love the title, best wishes Lin...

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:28:00 AM

Hello and thank you, dear Charlie.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/11/2017 9:20:00 PM

Beautifully done.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:27:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, M.L.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2017 8:47:00 PM

Well articulated theme on happiness, Lin. Good luck for the contest!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:27:00 AM

Thank you. I'm grateful for your well wishes.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/11/2017 8:07:00 PM

Lovely, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/11/2017 6:36:00 PM

Being in nature, the open skies, day or night add to give a person freedom. Your third stanza does it for me Lin. Your great use of internal rhyme make your words roll off the tongue so smoothly. An excellent entry! : )

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thanks ever so much for your considerate and detailed comments, dear Connie. I love your visits. ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2017 6:11:00 PM

Absolutely perfect for the contest Lin and I am smiling reading your lovely lines and relate to poem so much:-) hugs jan xx into faves for when I need to read something uplifting and that title is so so clever!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/11/2017 6:13:00 PM

Thank you for such sweet remarks, Jan, and I owe you a few smiles. I didn't mention chocolate, but I figure that's a given. lol