Happy Golden Moon Tableau

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Tableau Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Written: August 15, 2023 Picture number: 3 ________________________________________________________________ Moon shines—white jade plate. Swish as broad sky mime. Two palm tree twigs spate. Toads and moon rays chime. Where flickers share gate Poised shore smells sublime.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2023 11:10:00 AM

Lasaad, your eloquent words equated the moon to a precious white jade "plate." This tableau is definitely written with your signature, stellar ability to make words sing - to make words set a scene that I am drawn into as if by enchantment! Congratulations on your win! Really enjoyed this poem. Blessings to you dear friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2023 3:12:00 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Las :) - hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/20/2023 5:58:00 PM

Wonderful descriptiveness, Sotto! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2023 12:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely done

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/18/2023 9:53:00 AM

I long for a night such as your poetry describes! Bol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2023 1:43:00 AM

- A beautiful description of this wonderful photo ...(I chose the same) - Best wishes...a winning poem without a doubt, Las :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/17/2023 11:41:00 PM

Very beautiful:)

Valsa George

Date: 8/17/2023 8:57:00 PM

You have a unique way of approaching a subject quite different from the ordinary ! Here you have exhibited the power of minute observation. Even the palm fronds haven't escaped your eyes. Great entry. All the Best dear friend.