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Happy Ever After

A silly old man in Poughkeepsie In love with a beautiful gypsy She took him far away On a warm sunny day When he was a little bit tipsy.
written October 4, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/6/2021 12:37:00 PM
He was a lucky man!
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Date: 10/6/2021 12:12:00 AM
So nice to smile at an easy uncomplicated limerick...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks, Delice. The syllable count is correct, but for some reason, it does flow like I thought it should. It is smile-worthy, however.
Date: 10/5/2021 8:27:00 PM
Hello Milton ... and now he has to find his way back when stone cold sober - very good Milton - Lindsay
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2021 8:51:00 AM
I suppose so, Lindsay. Thanks for your visit, your read, and your thoughts.
Date: 10/4/2021 10:40:00 PM
I needed the laugh, thank you xoxo
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/5/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Aurore. I'm glad you got a good laugh!

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