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Happy Dappy Happy

I Full of promise Hard work, Love, God, prayer, planning Yet enjoying America II Independence from fear Freedom from want Freedom for Cs: Creation, Children, Conscience

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/3/2022 7:50:00 PM

MJXHi Anii, long time no see. This came to me as a poem chock-full of profound declarations, even moreso: touching on Dec.of Indep. I also thought there were several “double meanings, aided by the way lack of punc. Let phrases run on, creating lesser solid ground. As there is more? Abt the definite of things these days, poem reflected the truer sadder time of this 7/4. Excellent theme so well expressed.

Anil Deo
Date: 7/4/2022 6:33:00 PM

God bless you, always in his wisdom & shalom. Thanx for your support Sally.