Happy Dappy Happy

I
Full of promise
Hard work, Love,
God, prayer, planning
Yet enjoying America

II
Independence from fear
Freedom from want
Freedom for Cs:
Creation, Children, Conscience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Eslinger Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 7:50 PM
MJXHi Anii, long time no see. This came to me as a poem chock-full of profound declarations, even moreso: touching on Dec.of Indep. I also thought there were several “double meanings, aided by the way lack of punc. Let phrases run on, creating lesser solid ground. As there is more? Abt the definite of things these days, poem reflected the truer sadder time of this 7/4. Excellent theme so well expressed.
Deo Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 6:33 PM
God bless you, always in his wisdom & shalom. Thanx for your support Sally.
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