Happy Birthday Saviour

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Today a trail of tears ran softly down my cheeks a chain Salt of this earth within countless suffering For the love of God and the risen Christ In the name of peace Honour His Holiness We approach the birthday of our Lord King of the promised land Your crowned Almighty in my soul Peace you came with angels rejoicing Beholding three wise men kneel following your starlight Shepherd of destiny Baby Jesus I love you with all of my heart completely

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2016 9:58:00 AM

what a truly beautiful Christmas poem Liam - hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/24/2016 1:43:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is a most beautiful n' outstanding Christmas poem, you've have painted here,my dearest friend Liam.A masterpiece!I truly enjoyed it!Just dazzling!Very beautifully written Christmas piece!Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Powerful poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a Very Merry Christmas to you n' your very dear family n' a Very Happy New Year too Liam!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/24/2016 12:24:00 PM

This is so very nice. Merry Christmas! :)