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unrhyme tercets a symbol of the trinity twelve is his laws passed down truth 

Happy Birthday Saviour

Today a trail of tears 
ran softly down my cheeks a chain 
Salt of this earth within countless suffering

For the love of God and the risen Christ 
In the name of peace Honour His Holiness 
We approach the birthday of our Lord

King of the promised land 
Your crowned Almighty in my soul 
Peace you came with angels rejoicing

Beholding three wise men kneel 
following your starlight Shepherd of destiny 
Baby Jesus I love you with all of my heart completely
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:58 AM
what a truly beautiful Christmas poem Liam - hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is a most beautiful n' outstanding Christmas poem, you've have painted here,my dearest friend Liam.A masterpiece!I truly enjoyed it!Just dazzling!Very beautifully written Christmas piece!Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Powerful poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a Very Merry Christmas to you n' your very dear family n' a Very Happy New Year too Liam!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Sands Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM
This is so very nice. Merry Christmas! :)
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