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Happy Birthday Honey

My hot ice, my sprinter-Turtle, purple rose and my wife,
your creation puzzles nature as every cell in you gives comfort.
So cheerful you are, that your shadow has a dimple
you shed a tear and oxygen pulls down its jean
from your singing, the morning flower finds a cardigan
and that effortless smile of yours makes the moon find cover in a blanket.

So sophisticated, modern and divinely engineered,
your virtues have curbed our challenges to be temporary migrants
and have rendered the sparks of the city daughters wireless.
Your flesh at sight, makes an intending foreign kiss crash,
your beauty wins all contests,
far above the surrounding maidens hands down,
even without judges.

So industrious and intelligent,
you take a break and time is given a handkerchief
if you were the president,
Orphans will own grocery stores, rodents will build their own castles.
You danced in dust, yet the weather develops a good handwriting
you are happiness’ algorithm, Fortune’s ultimate charm
evident by a life on a non-stop green traffic light.

Your breath sustains a botanical garden
and your whispers come in a lovely accent.
The sun only illuminates, when it borrows your eyelashes
and on your sexiness, the Greek gods form a formidable cabinet.
You have been more than a helper and a partner to me
from the connection of our hearts, came the discovery of the internet.

Street lights have developed ears on account of our lovely gossips
all these make loving you, the best decision I’ve made in my life.
I’m blessed to have you grow with me to be the world’s most powerful couple.
Happy birthday to you my love, my life, my heartbeat and my wife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Nicholsen Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 2:07 AM
This is so very beautiful what an exquisite write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
Gasun Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Such a gorgeous birthday poem, a wonderful gift to your lovely wife my dear poet friend, Fonum. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 5:30 PM
Founom this is such a beautiful birthday card for your wife. I know she loved it and will keep it forever. God Bless my friend. JB
Jangid Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:49 AM
An honest husband can write such a powerful and amazing lines. Perhaps the best gift for birthday. God bless you both. B8s
Ball Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 11:23 PM
WoW! Funom! What a lovely birthday poem for your wife. "So cheerful you are that your shadow has a dimple." What sweet words you have penned just for her. I hope you put this on a card she can keep forever. Absolutely beautiful. God Bless my friend. JB
Gregory Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 1:32 AM
wow, you gave us a true goal, I am on board for such a one as her. you render well the values. nicely done
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 1:27 AM
what a wonderful birthday tribute, she sounds the most wonderful person. hope all is well with you Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so much Allison. Yes, I am fine and I hope you are too. Nice communicating with you.
Horsman Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 10:08 PM
So pleased to have read this wonderful dedication..Stay Safe, my friend. Harry
Makama Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you so much my good friend.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Oh my goodness. She is a goddess. I can't say all those many good things about my own spouse but I hope I can come up with ways to express his best characteristics!
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Brul Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 9:13 PM
No other gift could be sweeter, lovely and priceless than this loving tribute. Happiest birthday to your loving wife. She is your fortune.
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Agustin Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Wow! I rejoice with you ... for having a wife as wonderful as your muse has expressed; and with your wife for your love for her, exposed by your poetic heart. God bless you. A blessed birthday to your wife as well.
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much Beata
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Lovely birthday tribute to your wife Funom, I hope she had a lovely day. Tom
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Yes, we had a blast on that day. Thank you very much Tom.
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