Happy Birthday, Covenant

spirit’s star blazes
angels slough caste to chorus
tongues of shepherds freeze
pride-twisted scripture withers
born clean is the King of Souls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 2:01 AM
Beautiful glowing silver pen, Perry! Very well articulated Christmas celebration tanka, dear friend. Much enjoyed it indeed! A 7 for you! Hope your editing work is coming along nice. ;) I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Hope you have a very nice week! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:34 PM
And a very Merry Christmas to you , Dorian.
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