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Happy Birthday, Covenant

spirit’s star blazes angels slough caste to chorus tongues of shepherds freeze pride-twisted scripture withers born clean is the King of Souls

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/15/2014 2:01:00 AM

Beautiful glowing silver pen, Perry! Very well articulated Christmas celebration tanka, dear friend. Much enjoyed it indeed! A 7 for you! Hope your editing work is coming along nice. ;) I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Hope you have a very nice week! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Perry Mcdaid
Date: 12/16/2014 3:34:00 PM

And a very Merry Christmas to you , Dorian.