Happy Anniversary

Blessed union indeed
Chalk up another one
Another year of tolerated misery
Are you really considering
Suffering like this to perpetuity
For the rest of your life
Never anything nice to say
Bickering and ing whatever the cause
Using harsh words to tear each other down
Life is so short and true mates so scarce
Can you not focus on the things that do work
Instead of constantly arguing
Over every petty issue
I win You lose
The bitter chant of victory
Is it not plain to see
No one ever wins in your game
It’s pathetic, cruel and inhumane
Tongue lashings
Out come the daggers
Who would believe
You’ve been married forty years
Take a couple steps back
It’s not too late to 
Start respecting one another
Well, good luck
At least try to survive
Until your next anniversary


AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 8, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/9/2018 9:14:00 AM
How well you have described--I suspect--many marriages, Line! Janice
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Date: 2/9/2018 10:58:00 AM
Sad. Thanks, Janice. Best wishes.
Date: 2/8/2018 12:28:00 PM
I love this one, Line. Somewhere inside, I do think all that bickering belies the love that is really there but even after 40 years, it still needs to be said in words and actions xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2018 4:48:00 PM
Got to nip any hint of bickering in the bud. Bad habits are so easy to slip into. Thank your for your visit, Mike.
Date: 2/8/2018 8:16:00 AM
Wow, that would be so awful. My grandparents on my dad’s side were unhappily married for over 60 years. I have no recollection of them ever being happy together.
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Date: 2/8/2018 10:53:00 AM
Wow - I got married for the first time at 50 so that's when I started saying "honeymoon till the end". Life is so short when you're happy.
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