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She places little forget me nots All throughtout the house She tries to leave them everywhere To be found by her loving spouse Their twenty-first anniversary Will be celebrated tonight And she's found the perfect gift To make the evening bright Married out of high school To the first man she ever dated Her parents told her not to rush And wished she would have waited Her husband pulls in the driveway As she watches her plan unfold She hides out in the bedroom Where he'll find his pot of gold Her husband finds the note she left As a smile crosses his face He finds a second, then a third As he moves from place to place He makes his way to the bedroom And finds his wife upon the bed She asks him why he cheated on her Then puts a bullet in his head She walks quietly to the bathroom And runs herself a bath As she sits down in the water She starts to smile then laugh She reaches for the radio And pulls it in the water Sparks cover her body And a picture of her daughter The picture catches the curtains on fire As the ceiling comes tumbling down Happy anniversary the last note said As the house burns to the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:18:00 PM
congrats on your great twist and shock poem :D
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:34:00 AM
Oh my, I was gripped all the way through Larry. Your words flowed so smoothly. Congrats on your win >> James
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:35:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved place, larry
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Date: 8/7/2010 4:33:00 PM
Congrats, my friend. Great win. Ralph
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your big win in the Twist and Shock contest with this exceptional piece .. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:28:00 AM
Oh my. I have goose bumps. Certainly had a twist and a shock. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:22:00 AM
Great write with this one! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:18:00 AM
Hi Larry :), super congrats on your 3rd place win ^_^! This was just a tragically twisty write, happy anniversary indeed! yiikes--nikko :)
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Date: 7/17/2010 1:49:00 PM
What a tragic tale. Awesome write, my friend. Have a good weekend. Ralph
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