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Happiness Preserved

A canopy of flowers 'neath a shady bower Exquisite weather for a life together We pledge our oath in solemn troth Happiness preserved ~ of memories deserved

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Date: 9/3/2022 8:07:00 PM
There are hundreds of poems and songs about love that aren't there Gershon? That says something I guess. Where would we all be without it? There were swans at the pond at my wedding, bagpipes, and white orchids Now married 26 years. Maybe because of the swans. Tee Hee! Your poem is so pretty to visualize, so lacy, and lovely. Glad I found it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2022 8:41:00 PM
Is your favorite 'Song' 'Swan Lake,' too?! Happiness Forever, Gershon
Date: 8/28/2022 2:06:00 PM
A little bit of loveliness Right there Mr Wolf! Beautiful…Debx
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Deb M
Date: 8/28/2022 7:52:00 PM
Perhaps you should renew your vows with your lovely wife? Maybe that’s what it means??
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2022 6:39:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. Been thinking and dreaming a lot about weddings lately. Wonder why?! Maybe I was 'blocking them out' before... I am probably a great Freudian case study.
Date: 8/28/2022 11:55:00 AM
This short poem is exquisite both in its beauty and brevity Gershon . I am Faving this one. Blessings xxoo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2022 6:40:00 PM
Your FAVE is deeply appreciated, Connie. Wishing you Hope and Healing! Hugs, Gershon
Date: 8/28/2022 6:13:00 AM
Lovesome couplets, dear friend !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2022 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, dear Valsa. :) gw
Date: 8/28/2022 1:17:00 AM
G.W. You romantic you.Enjoyed.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2022 6:43:00 PM
Better romantic than pedantic, I guess. Thanks, Vickey! Love and Life, Gershon
Date: 8/27/2022 11:54:00 PM
A lovely couplet, for a loving couple.
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Date: 8/27/2022 10:05:00 PM
Very true Gershon expressed wonderfully and cleverly...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2022 10:55:00 PM
Appreciated, Michael. May we all look back on our wedding days with joy -- and maybe more often than once a decade or so...

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