Sotto Poet Poet Shape

Happiness Fluffled Feathers

I        I        I        I              I            I      I      I      I        I              I
I      I              I            I                          I                I                I       
I              I            I              I            I              I            I    I        I
        I              I            I                          I                    I          I         
I              I            I            I            I              I              I              I       
I              I            I                                I                  I            I         
I        I            I                I          I                                                I
              I        I      I                                  I stared            I          I 
  I        I      I          I                             a soaring * sparrow          I         
                                                    with a jealous eye,          I
  I               I                          craving his freedom,                       I               
         I                          to roam the sky; then he                     
                             alit on a twig shivering in the
                      rain as I sat warmly sheltered
        behind my                windowpane                       /    /    
                                       I       I                              /    /
_____________________/ \__ / \ _____________/    /___
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Paige Hind April 21, 2025 at 10:04 AM Beautiful shape poem, one of the better ones I have read -

Crystol Woods April 21, 2025 at 9:44 AM Beautiful shape poetry! The sparrow is subtle but perfectly crafted. So creative and visually stunning... plus a remarkable poem! Xo

Duke Beaufort April 21, 2025 at 4:46 AM SP, this is a wonderful creation that must have been fun to illustrate as done. I can almost put myself in your place as this really brings the moment to life.

Joanna Daniel April 21, 2025 at 12:27 AM Delightful indeed, Sotto, congratulations:)

Valsa George April 19, 2025 at 9:23 AM Dear Lasaad, you are not merely a poet, but a real artist too. I can see the sparrow sitting on a twig in the rain while you comfortably stay sheltered in your room. Looking out and enjoying such beautiful scenes while it rains is so delightful. All the Best dear friend.