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Happiness Fluffled Feathers

I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I stared I I I I I I a soaring * sparrow I with a jealous eye, I I I craving his freedom, I I to roam the sky; then he alit on a twig shivering in the rain as I sat warmly sheltered behind my windowpane / / I I / / _____________________/ \__ / \ _____________/ /___ ----------------------------------- -

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 10:04:00 AM

Beautiful shape poem, one of the better ones I have read -

Crystol Woods

Date: 4/21/2025 9:44:00 AM

Beautiful shape poetry! The sparrow is subtle but perfectly crafted. So creative and visually stunning... plus a remarkable poem! Xo

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/21/2025 4:46:00 AM

SP, this is a wonderful creation that must have been fun to illustrate as done. I can almost put myself in your place as this really brings the moment to life.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/21/2025 12:27:00 AM

Delightful indeed, Sotto, congratulations:)

Valsa George

Date: 4/19/2025 9:23:00 AM

Dear Lasaad, you are not merely a poet, but a real artist too. I can see the sparrow sitting on a twig in the rain while you comfortably stay sheltered in your room. Looking out and enjoying such beautiful scenes while it rains is so delightful. All the Best dear friend.