Happiness and Love

I have begun a new journey To experience the commencement of change, my infinite potential A need to savor this life.. Venture beyond the general consensus of who I am reaching for who I will be.... I need to bare my soul breaking down my identities..... What do I see?... What embodies me?.. Is it a collection of my lessons I've amassed?.... Ones I've put my own spin on making them each unique and I my own....? So many characters I've played in life?... a mother, a lover, a friend, a daughter... all my personalities?.. I'm so tired of self imposed limitations, I need no more.... This year brought me a new chance to do this right... I will grab what life has to offer along with my learned lessons, and not just one personality... I will merge all my characters Into one, so I can become better than who i was Become my future not my past..... To find my true happiness..... Become the true warrior I claim to be..... Embrace her and soften her... Opening her up to happiness and a love....

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Date: 10/22/2019 10:20:00 AM
This really is a very good piece of poetry, Brenda...I was compelled to read it through twice. I have to say there is a sense of an underlying strength about it all; you know how much I prefer your "upbeat" poetry...this has all those characteristics that your best poetry contains: that resolute grittiness, a prevailing mood of cheerfulness and steadfastness -- makes for great reading! Enjoyed immensely. Lots of affection always. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 10:32:00 AM
Ahh see I know you like my more upbeat poetry and I'm overjoyed you loved this one! You see I have hardly any of the depressing writes from before!;) trying to keep it more upbeat for those who enjoy it! Thank you John!;) all my affection!;)
Date: 10/18/2019 3:22:00 PM
A very upbeat and encouraging poem Brenda. I could feel the strength in this.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/18/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Chris! Appreciate your kindness!;)
Date: 10/17/2019 10:43:00 PM
Brenda, Such a fine warrior with lesson learned. And such a fine friend as the other roles in life. You have inspired me and so many on the Soup. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 11:42:00 PM
Richard you are far too kind! Thank you my friend so much!;)
Date: 10/17/2019 7:29:00 PM
I enjoyed this philosophical piece. For me I will embrace my now for I will never be this same person ever again. I hope my future self looks back fondly on who I am. Blessing Rick.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 11:41:00 PM
Lol Rick I may write it but not sure I feel it sometimes!;) thank you for your comment!;)
Date: 10/17/2019 6:34:00 PM
All the very best Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 10/17/2019 4:14:00 PM
Fine penning Brenda, good positive piece so well written! May so your dreams come true!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 11:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon! I so appreciate your friendship!;)
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