Debbie Duncan Poet Couplet

Happiness

Hands twisted in happiness.
Just the two of us.

The taste of you 
excites me to no end.

Dripping from my fingers.
Drooling from my lips.

I love the smell of you.
The thought of tasting you.

The taste of you on me.
Draws me into you.

Now don't tell me 
You don't like the taste 

of CINNABONS  too! 





   1:14pm friday   7/ 24/ 2015

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Duke Beaufort October 13, 2015 at 3:45 AM Very funny--yes. Food becomes more and more of a source of pleasure for us. And of course, my mind being what it is, was thinking of something else. However now I can laugh for the whole day.

Mike A. October 12, 2015 at 10:22 PM The best Cinnabons poems I have ever read.

Kevin Fairbrother September 3, 2015 at 6:38 PM Beautiful Debbie, makes you want to be entwined whilst the words flow. Cheers

Paul Callus August 25, 2015 at 3:33 PM You tease and you tempt, Debbie:) Good final twist...Cinnabons!! Mmmmm // paul

Constance La France August 11, 2015 at 9:11 AM Debbie this is deliciously delightful, a yummy 7 and thanks for visiting my ritz poem

Len Gasun August 6, 2015 at 8:42 AM :))))Great image of happiness in your wonderful poem my dear friend, Debbie. I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my humble writes. Have a great day! love lots and big hug, Leonora

James Fraser July 28, 2015 at 3:40 PM Haha, nice one Debbie, caught me out, hugs//James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2015 at 3:40 PM debbie, you asked if I am still in Iowa. Sadly, no. Look for the poem I wrote on Utah's state flag and gull. That is for the contest of JUdy's! I hope to see YOUR state poem soon: either CA or IA. It's up to you. I lived five years in CA and loved it, from '85 to '90. Was in the SF earthquake!!

Elizabeth Agiantritis July 27, 2015 at 7:35 AM Great ending! Didn't see that one coming :-)

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2015 at 8:22 AM I like the image of happiness this conjured up prior to the cinnabons arriving on the scene. *lol*! Perhaps I will arrange some combined happiness.

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2015 at 11:55 PM haha, this looks like something I would write on happiness. Cinnabons are to die for. they even have ice cream of it!!! LOVE This.