Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: My new Tanka here, "Happiness," is self-explanatory from the standpoint of ideal circumstances. For me, "Happiness" signifies in essence, a positive state of mind that is well-worth the time for each and every one of us to try to strive for and maintain -- if at all possible. Unfortunately, given the realistic situations of various problems, personal relationships, and many other negative events that impact each of us as human beings -- one's true state of happiness may tend to be more variable and changeable at times. To this, I say: "Such is Life." (Gary Bateman - November 20, 2018)

Thematic Categories: allegory, blessing, confidence, emotions, future, passion, and symbolism.  

Happiness

Happiness

A positive state—
A true goal for everyone!
Seek now and always . . . 
	Never be afraid to try . . . 
It shall make a difference!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved
November 20, 2018 (Tanka)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Very wise words, never give up, no matter how dark the hour seems!!
Bateman Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Hello Art, Thanks very much for your read and comment here. Sometimes "wise words" are all we have to challenge the dark hours that all of us, on occasion, may face in our lives. Never Give Up!! Best Always, Gary
Blown Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 9:32 AM
being of proton mind...i am always positive
Bateman Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Hello Sand Blown, This is very good to hear!! For all of the "Non-Protonians," however, the circumstances might be different. LOL!! Thanks for your read and comment!! Cheers, Gary
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 3:44 AM
- So true, Gary :) - Change puts us to the test, pushing us out of comfort zones ... but, we must always try - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Thanks for your read and comment here. What you say and observed folds right into the meaning and intent of my Tanka. Yes, we must always try for sure!! It beats the negative alternative!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 5:13 PM
I like that. Never be afraid to try. Great one Gary :)
Bateman Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Hello Dear Heidi, I really appreciate your read and comment here. I tried to write this Tanka with an uplifting note. Yes, we should never be afraid to try. Best Wishes, Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Wise advice Gary. We would all live in harmony if everyone followed your advice. Lovely Tanka my friend! : ) xxoo
Bateman Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Hello Dear Connie, Thanks for your read and note here. Yes -- the message of this Tanka speaks to more of what "Happiness" could or should be ideally. Happiness does play a role for sure in each of our lives. No emotion or human concept can ever truly be the perfect result or thing. It doesn't hurt to try though. Best Wishes, Gary
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