Happily Ever After-W

Here is the love story of Zhi Nu and Niu Lang
A romantic ancient Chinese tale of very long 
Zhi was a nymph and Niu Lang was a cowherd
Cowherd-nymph love forbidden,secretly wedded.

Had two children, but their happy life ended.
As by the goddess Wang  they were detected.
The goddess took Zhi Nu back to the heaven 
Niu Lang chased them with his two children.

They were blocked by the milky way- sky river
And the children kept crying for their mother,
Shouting her name, Niu and children wandered
By their pain and grief, the goddess was moved.

She allowed them to meet one day in a year
Could be seen in the sky as Altair and Vega star
They meet and live happily ever after for a day.
Day celebrated as Qixi- Chinese valentine day.

Wish I had a beloved like the nymph Zhi Nu fair
So that I can live in the sky with immortal affair.
Like William Blake would say "Death be not proud"
I would have said unlike Blake "Life be proud". 

II
Yet another story of Yeh-Shen, the orphan girl
A Chinese Cinderella living with stepmother cruel
She had a friend, a fish living in a nearby river
Once the fish was killed by her cruel stepmother.

Yeh-Shen was very unhappy for of her friend dead.
An old man told her that bones of fish were powered
One day she talked to the bones of her fish friend
Then eventually Yeh-Shen in a beauty transformed.

Once she visited the king’s palace, the king saw her
They were married soon, lived happily ever after.


Wish I was tiger as friend with cruel stepmother
So I could enjoy good things at this age forever.
Wish I was a sculptor like Pygmalion, not a poet
Make alive ivory Galatea by grace of Aphrodite
Married her blessed with the happiness and love
And to have enjoyed long and blissful life to live
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*Based on Greek and Chinese fairy tales of Pygmalion-Galatea, Zhi Nu and Niu Lang
and Yeh-Shen
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Fifth place winner in:
Contest: Happily ever after sponsored by John heck
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December 2, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Dr Ram..., .. it is nice to read this oldie and goody . :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "Happily Ever After" contest.. always~ PD
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:19 AM
really funny!! happy cheers on your win, dr. ram.. huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Very imaginative write. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Gorelick Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:36 AM
I sure enjoyed this one Dr Ram..congrats. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your super win in John's contest with this awesome entry my friend so totally entertaining a write.. enjoy with luv and wishing u the very best Happy New year from all of us here in the Garden State ..with luv..always...
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on your placement Dr. Ram in John Heck's contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Many congratulations for this well deserved win dearest Dr. Ram. A very happy New year to you and your Family.
Duffin Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Hi. Thanking you for your kind comments. Great work this. The ability that you have to develop a fable into your work is wonderful. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon
Culverhouse Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 8:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work and history of the fairy tales. You always amaze!
Babcock Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 6:04 AM
I love this type of story telling for tales often get lost. Good luck in the contest with this wonderful write. God Bless Phyl
Kannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 10:30 PM
you seem to be spinning it so well i was engrossed like a child here...hehe lovely end..sunkan
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 12:54 PM
WOW what a terrific read.Very entertaining thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.Thanks also for the kind comment and it's poets like you that gives us all inspiration.Teresa
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Well good luck in the contest with this one .. John will flip over this entry .. amazing tale told in poetry Dr. Ram... a wonderful piece my friend.. enjoyed ...
Witt-King Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 2:40 AM
Interesting stories, Dr. Ram. I wonder if you would check out my first blog posting. Many blessings,
Maverick Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 11:00 PM
Dear Dr Ram i sent you some soup mail some days ago, just realized you may be like and do not check often.
Wellington Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 8:33 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Appreciate your comments. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Interesting how you tie these legends together with your own thoughts and qutoes by poets like William Blake. Very cool, LIfe be proud!! You be the man, Dr. Ram. Luv,Andrea
Falotico Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Great poetry my friend, your work inspires me to strive for more with my writing... thank you Michael
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Good one ...Reads like a winner..Telling the tales of old in poetry form for all to learn of these ancient stories..Sara
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December 11, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Dr. Mehta, So full of wisdom and creativity... I enjoy your work. I'm uplifted and full of new knowledge each time I read what you have penned. Thank you for continuing to educate and inspire me...and thank you for your kind words as always. Lay
Maverick Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 10:30 AM
very well crafted work, two different culture based storys working well captivate the imagination, Dr Ram
Ruebel Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Hello Dr. Mehta, Once again you have made my morning, these are such wonderful Stories. I enjoyed them Winner..... As Always, Shar
Iyer Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Very nice story rendered in a beautiful way through poetic lines Sir
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December 11, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Great poem!, and thank you for your comment. Much appreciated!
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