Happily Ever After-New Year Prayer

To you who brought the light to day giving life to every season if on this eve I may humbly pray for Grace to know my reason Hold fast my hand and bear my soul as I rise and meet my future lot loose fears that face the morrows roll from will my faith has taught Stay near my God, guide every step as I seek the fortune that awaits bless the road I traverse next hold me close with your embrace If in this year you call me home leave love in all the hearts I've known 12/27/2017 For New Years Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodriques
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Amen!
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Richard...
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 11:52 PM
"Leave love in all the hearts I've known", such a touching request. Admire you so much for allowing us to see spirit of a gentle giant of a man. Beautiful! bbn
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Barbara..
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Absolutely touching.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Curtis.
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 4:43 AM
- A beautiful and touching prayer, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Downing  Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Absolutely beautiful! I love every line, and a fave for sure! This should place well in the contest but I'm still wishing you a best of win... Hugs and smiles :)
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Akkina.
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:11 PM
what a beautiful prayer, Charlie, and I love the ending couplet. Happy New Year!!
Smith Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 10:24 PM
I REALLY like this, Charlie. Happy New Year! Janice
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thank you Janice.
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 11:12 PM
I do share this beautiful feeling ... Lovely poem ...
Smith Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Probir.
Michael Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 9:48 AM
I feel the same way... Lovely poem Charlie...All the best
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Arturo...
Godwin Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:19 PM
This is so well written and rhymed! I love the poem's reflection of your talent and I love the contents, just beautiful, Charlie. I was touched by the read, touched in way that is all good, through and through a great poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:11 AM
You are too kind CayCay, thank you...
Horsman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:23 PM
My favourite form, is a sonnet Charlie, and this is so wonderful....happy new year....
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thank you Harry, happy New Year...
One Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Beautiful sentiments Charlie..
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Kinch  Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Such a soothing, beautiful write and I so agree on Connie's comment on the last two lines, perfect.
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Elizabeth.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:41 PM
Beautiful prayer Charlie. Already a winner for me :) my best to you! xomo
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Maureen.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Your last two lines should be a Quote that lives on as a legacy to your talent Charlie. I loved your poem! "If in this year you call me home leave love in all the hearts I've known". Bravo! : )
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:05 PM
How kind you are Ms. Connie, thank you.
Teagan Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 12:47 PM
This is lovely.
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Thank you so much Becca...
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Excellent, Charlie..the poem flows with lovely rhythm and your words are so soothing and pleasant--best for a win.
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Thanks Vijay.
Sands Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 12:10 PM
I love this Charlie! Very well written. Good luck in the contest ! :)
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Thank you Heidi..
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