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Happily discontent, that I am, that I be

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“The most painful state of being is remembering the future, particularly the one you’ll never have.”
"To dare is to lose one's footing momentarily. Not to dare is to lose oneself."
quotes by Søren Kierkegaard  
"Make the best use of what is in your power, and take the rest as it happens." - Epictetus
"Be happy with what you have while working for what you want."
— in Atomic Habits by James Clear
"The secret to happiness is progress. If you're growing, you're going to feel alive. If you're going backwards, you're going to feel like you're dying." - Tony Robbins
"Even when it’s dark out, the sun is shining somewhere." J. Cole (rapper)
"I'm going where the sun keeps shining through the pouring rain"  song 'Everybody's Talkin', written by Fred Neil and featured in film 'Midnight Cowboy' 

Note: This poem uses 'The CounterPoint Tree' poetry form created by the author, with counterpoints arrayed about a trunk '<=>'.

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Happily discontent, that I am, that I be now <=> future happy <=> discontent achievable <=> out of reach joie de vivre <=> bags of regrets what I am now <=> what I could be love the journey <=> are we there yet? live in the present <=> dream of becoming I'm truly self made <=> I'm reactionary, dependent let it be, let it be, now <=> endless mindful reflection I’m restless, but at peace <=> unable to sleep, daydream I’m thankful for many things <=> when will this nightmare end? nothing is perfect, fully satisfies <=> quest for perfection ruins the journey life is an ever evolving process <=> hit or miss, sink or swim, stuns growth a chest full of good things in life <=> a pile of things underachieved, undone thankful for what I’ve got so far <=> I want more, but I'm burdened by failures acceptance without complacency <=> resentful, jealous of what others have accept that creativity makes mistakes <=> counting failures, clutters & confounds

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Date: 4/16/2025 4:11:00 AM
Love your ingenious, refreshingly unique approach to the contest theme, John. Love what you've created here. I'm faving...
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Date: 4/16/2025 11:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your feedback. Greatly appreciated. Cheers and Best Wishes to you!

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