Happening

* was unsure about posting this as this is a very personal experience I wrote it to convey my feeling in a blog *



These are the words I could not speak, with no guidance in my teens I took to drink until I found a lass who dragged me back we had a few good years, we had a lad and a lass the lad is fine grew tall and strong.

But look at me I've skipped ahead, a few good years like I said, then we split coz things were dead in the end, she left the kids and a load of debt.

I loved my kids and still do my daughter was a problem child something happened at her birth a lack of air that made her sick a mental illness was the result with bad moods and angry display's, no school or place could hold her so always back home she came.

She turned eighteen a calmer time I thought, but soon the darkest of days arrived just a normal day, in a normal week, in a normal life.

To the kitchen I went, a cup of coffee would hit the spot I heard my daughter behind me from the rattle in the sink,
it's a cup she will be looking for so I turned to ask what she wanted to drink.

I got it wrong it was a knife that had been lifted from the sink, as I turned the downward stroke was almost complete, the knife caught me in the chest her aim was off just a bit, a tangle of arms a fight for my life resulted in that damn knife hitting the deck if I not turned chances are it would have been a fatal blow to the neck.

She went away handcuffed up, not a word or glance between us passed never to see my darling daughter again how can a bloke live with that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/17/2016 6:22:00 AM
This is so so sad and unfortunate. Fate plus our actions and reactions following. Glad you vent it out here. Love is the best solution and settles down everything in TIME. Regards Sunita
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