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Hank's Double Exposure

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Example for my contest.

'Neath the mountain, on river bends bank Paw prints left...where old grizzly drank A canoe, missing a plank Abandoned...near it sank My mind, to be frank Clackety clank Drew a blank I thank... Hank

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/6/2019 7:13:00 PM

Superb writing, Charles, and great example for your contest:)

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2019 3:40:00 PM

This is brill...

Constance La France

Date: 11/3/2019 10:08:00 AM

Charles, fun poem and great example for your Nonet contest and this poem is a winner!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2019 7:36:00 PM

awesome example, Charles. Great contest idea.

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/2/2019 4:59:00 PM

It sure didn't stank...a nonet rhyme, quite the feat

Eve Roper

Date: 11/2/2019 3:59:00 PM

Enjoyed you had me in heaven with the first two lines.. I miss the mountains of Oregon :) great example , but also rhyming words, Charles.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/2/2019 2:04:00 AM

Very nice and cute as in humorous - a pleasure to read. I leave poem-smiling! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May

Date: 11/1/2019 9:16:00 PM

Very nicely done Charles..

Larry Bradfield

Date: 11/1/2019 9:15:00 PM

Excellent example..!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/1/2019 1:57:00 PM

oh gosh what a challenge Charles , will see if my muse can come up with one for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 11/1/2019 1:27:00 PM

amazing example! Who can top that?? Thanks for sharing :) -luloo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2019 8:15:00 AM

Wow! Is it good that you have probably won your own contest? I think this is terrific Charles.