Charles Messina Poet Nonet

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Example for my contest. 

Hank's Double Exposure

'Neath the mountain, on river bends bank 
Paw prints left...where old grizzly drank 
A canoe, missing a plank 
Abandoned...near it sank 
My mind, to be frank 
Clackety clank 
Drew a blank 
I thank... 
Hank

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Joanna Daniel November 6, 2019 at 7:13 PM Superb writing, Charles, and great example for your contest:)

Silent One November 3, 2019 at 3:40 PM This is brill...

Constance La France November 3, 2019 at 10:08 AM Charles, fun poem and great example for your Nonet contest and this poem is a winner!

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2019 at 7:36 PM awesome example, Charles. Great contest idea.

Ts Poetry November 2, 2019 at 4:59 PM It sure didn't stank...a nonet rhyme, quite the feat

Eve Roper November 2, 2019 at 3:59 PM Enjoyed you had me in heaven with the first two lines.. I miss the mountains of Oregon :) great example , but also rhyming words, Charles.

CayCay Godwin November 2, 2019 at 2:04 AM Very nice and cute as in humorous - a pleasure to read. I leave poem-smiling! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May November 1, 2019 at 9:16 PM Very nicely done Charles..

Larry Bradfield November 1, 2019 at 9:15 PM Excellent example..!!

Jan Allison November 1, 2019 at 1:57 PM oh gosh what a challenge Charles , will see if my muse can come up with one for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars November 1, 2019 at 1:27 PM amazing example! Who can top that?? Thanks for sharing :) -luloo

Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2019 at 8:15 AM Wow! Is it good that you have probably won your own contest? I think this is terrific Charles.