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Hanging On

I just wanted your attention nothing more. But you are busy chasing the north wind. I am here by the southern breeze, waiting.

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Kp Nunez

Date: 1/23/2016 9:24:00 AM

You can change it to Verse. :-)

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/23/2016 9:07:00 AM

Hello, Naddy. I enjoyed going through your list. You have a wide range of interesting takes on any subject. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Keep writing, keep posting and continue visiting other pages. PS. Not sure I have encountered this kind of haiku before...I am familiar with 5-7-5 syllables traditional about nature. Is it a modern variation? hugs! :-)

Naddy Zahari
Date: 1/23/2016 9:20:00 AM

Hi Kim, it might not even be a Haiku. I would assume since it's a short one. They don't have 'short poem' in the list though. Thanks for reminding me about the 5-7-5 syllables thing. Definitely need to change the category then :/