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Hanging On

I just wanted your attention
nothing more.
But you are busy 
chasing the north wind.

I am here
by the southern breeze, 
waiting.

for himi miss youfree verse

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Kp Nunez

January 23, 2016 at 9:24 AM

You can change it to Verse. :-)

Kp Nunez

January 23, 2016 at 9:07 AM

Hello, Naddy. I enjoyed going through your list. You have a wide range of interesting takes on any subject. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Keep writing, keep posting and continue visiting other pages. PS. Not sure I have encountered this kind of haiku before...I am familiar with 5-7-5 syllables traditional about nature. Is it a modern variation? hugs! :-)

Naddy Zahari

January 23, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Hi Kim, it might not even be a Haiku. I would assume since it's a short one. They don't have 'short poem' in the list though. Thanks for reminding me about the 5-7-5 syllables thing. Definitely need to change the category then :/

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