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hanging bridge hiku

For Brian Strand's Your Choice U Poetry Contest 5 June 2025 swing the void, ! ! ! \ a e / ! ! ! ! ! ! \ b v / ! ! ! ! ! ! ! \ o / ! ! ! ! wind whispers ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! through swaying ropes, \*/ ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! ! \*/ _________!_____ ! ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! ! _____!__________ ~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~ ! ! ! ! ! / ! \ ! ! ! ! !~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~ ! ! ! ! / \!!!! / \ ! ! ! ! ! ! ! /\ \!!!!!!! / /\ ! ! ! ! ! //\ \ !!!!!!!!!! / /\\ ! ! ! / / \ !!!!!!!!!!!!! / \ \ ! ~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~ / / \ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! / \ \ ~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~~ steps across the wild. 1st Place Winner (June 6, 2025)

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Date: 6/7/2025 3:01:00 AM
Excellent, such hard work to do this. Well done, Bernard. Well deserved. X.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/7/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thanks, Ghairo. It's a new challenge in haiku poetry. I love doing this.
Date: 6/7/2025 3:01:00 AM
Excellent, such hard work to do this. Well done, Bernard. Well deserved. X.
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Date: 6/6/2025 12:35:00 PM
Fabulous ! I really appreciate the work you put into this wonderful Haiku.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/6/2025 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, Speaks Volumes. I enjoyed this one, because I love challenges. It's really fun to make this kind of haiku with a text character illustration.

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