hanging bridge hiku
For Brian Strand's Your Choice U Poetry Contest
5 June 2025
swing the void,
! ! ! \ a e / ! ! !
! ! ! \ b v / ! ! !
! ! ! ! \ o / ! ! ! !
wind whispers ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! through swaying ropes,
\*/ ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! ! \*/
_________!_____ ! ! ! ! ! ! \ / ! ! ! ! ! ! _____!__________
~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~ ! ! ! ! ! / ! \ ! ! ! ! !~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~
! ! ! ! / \!!!! / \ ! ! ! !
! ! ! /\ \!!!!!!! / /\ ! ! !
! ! //\ \ !!!!!!!!!! / /\\ ! !
! / / \ !!!!!!!!!!!!! / \ \ !
~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~ / / \ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! / \ \ ~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~~
steps across the wild.
1st Place Winner (June 6, 2025)
Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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