Hang Over

Just beneath the throat is a hot porridge the body knocks down but still operate heat all over, jump into the nearest fridge sight shivers in its domain so temperate morning light is covered by one big ridge aches and weariness don't want to separate from the stomach to the mouth is a bridge for a crazy out pour to generate since last sweet night, the mind is in a flop quick and short morbidity from its groove sips and gulps in an interplay nonstop require the next coffee to disapprove long consciousness puts the being back on top back to normal and Life is on the move.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Oh this is clever and different, and a joy to read..
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Thank you very much Harry
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Makes me so glad I don't drink! great sonnet Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:10 AM
hahahahahahaha... It's good you don't. Thank you very much for the comment
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:09 AM
You have a way with words my friend.
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much Richard
Austin Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:04 AM
You said it. I've been there. Good stuff, Funom
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:09 AM
thank you very much austin
La France Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Funom, this is quite the dark write, with some great vocabulary, I am loving it 7 ~
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much Broken Wings
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