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A Line Gauthier Contest: Bite Size No91 Resubmittions Only Poetry Submitted 28 Sept 24 Resubmitted 12 Oct 24
To weave a word, a fabric of thought, Each stroke on dreary image caught : Pale tinge of citrusy note, half drawn Written in bleak ,yellowing song-- Old letters soar now in ashen white, Where muted language of angst takes flight.

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Date: 11/12/2024 5:47:00 AM
Wow! Another stunning write my dear poet friend Nette! Congratulations on your top win! God bless you for sharing. Hugs
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Date: 11/11/2024 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved placement, Nette
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Date: 9/30/2024 7:55:00 AM
Oh my, what a beautifully moving and heart-touching piece this is, I could almost feel the scent of those handwritten emotions here... It's the first poem, perhaps, that I'm reading from you and I must say, your writing style is truly captivating. Gorgeous wordsmithery throughout with "Pale tinge of citrusy note, half drawn Written in beaten ,yellowing song--" Ethereal artistry reflected here.. Sending best wishes and light to you, a wonderful read it was ~
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Date: 9/30/2024 5:47:00 AM
That last line says a lot. Somehow it's easier to write down our feelings than to express them. Handwritten? Even better. Very nice Nette
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Date: 9/29/2024 8:13:00 PM
Love the dénouement, Nette! Lovely entry for Line's contest. I believe that this is just her cup of tea. ~ Me
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Date: 9/29/2024 5:58:00 PM
Powerful images of pain and ambivalence, Nette. Your imagery always blows me away with its poignancy, impact and creativity. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings
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Date: 9/29/2024 5:55:00 PM
our thoughts are the key, words here are precious to master angst, i think, a lovely poem indeed, best wishes
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Date: 9/29/2024 4:47:00 PM
To be a weaver of words is your calling, dear poet
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Date: 9/29/2024 2:17:00 PM
Wow. So pretty and nostalgic as well. Soupmail.
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