Hands of Time

The still, early morning crawl
The minutes tick, the hours tock

Hands of Time, marching on
Past the fences, past the farms

Put the mists before my eyes
Put the cobwebs in my mind

Climb the hill at glacial speed
Move with me – deceptively

Reel the line in steadily
So I think it’s you, not me – 

Don’t look back, as I am wont
Upon the tapestry you’ve wrought

Painted on vermillion skies
Slowly, slowly passing by

Leaving but a parting trace
Lost in lines upon my face

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Oh, Hands of Time! Marching on
Your masterpiece is but a con

Disengage – impassively
Even disingenuously

Let the light and landscape fade
As fade they will at close of day

Come for me before the dawn
Before I wake to find you gone

Taking from the blue sky blue 
The breath I once had held for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/15/2023 1:38:00 PM
This was a very talented poem! I really enjoyed reading it!
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John Oldham
Date: 6/16/2023 4:27:00 AM
Glad you liked it, Paige! Best Regards, John
Date: 6/7/2023 9:15:00 AM
One of my very favourite themes and you did it justice. Well penned, John ~
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Date: 6/9/2023 5:16:00 PM
Glad to hear, Line. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. I appreciate it :) Best Regards, John
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