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Hands Entwined

hands entwined,
     so is their hearts
          as they...

walk step-by-step.
     quintessentially
          passionate!

they are...
     but two souls,
          handcuffed;

perfectly
     in tandem.
          two kindred spirits,

their bond, unbreakable.
     the...
          story of their love!

(yalto)

 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables


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Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 09/11/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 9:44 AM
"Two souls handcuffed," "in tandem." Such creative imagery my friend and written in your wonderful Yalto form. Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) I'm quite glad you liked it, my friend!
Mcgee Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 7:18 AM
A wonderful love poem Edward. Congrats on the win.
Ibeh Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, Jeanne:-) I appreciate it.
Milgate Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:39 PM
lovely. thoughts, so different from what I am feeling so good to have something different. Thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 9:45 PM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
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