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hands entwined, so is their hearts as they... walk step-by-step. quintessentially passionate! they are... but two souls, handcuffed; perfectly in tandem. two kindred spirits, their bond, unbreakable. the... story of their love! (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (8)any form any theme contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 09/11/2020

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Date: 9/15/2020 9:44:00 AM
"Two souls handcuffed," "in tandem." Such creative imagery my friend and written in your wonderful Yalto form. Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) I'm quite glad you liked it, my friend!
Date: 9/15/2020 7:18:00 AM
A wonderful love poem Edward. Congrats on the win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne:-) I appreciate it.
Date: 9/11/2020 1:39:00 PM
lovely. thoughts, so different from what I am feeling so good to have something different. Thank you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)

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