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Hand In Hand

Slowly we walk on the sandy white beach, hand in hand A perfect Caribbean night, with sounds of the steel band A little kiss, a little hug, a little happiness from above The two of us together in paradise sharing our deep love Making memories on the first night of the rest of our life That beautiful vision sent to save me, is now my wife Playfully we both frolic in the surf, as the tide gently rolls Not a care in the world, two free spirits baring their souls The harvest moon is beaming high painting a perfect setting Two lovers absorbed in each other, forever remembering A repost that was accidentally deleted

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Date: 9/9/2016 8:58:00 PM
If your poems ever collide with Eileen's poems, the world better watch out!!!! We will triple the population for sure!!! :)
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Date: 9/8/2016 10:52:00 PM
I like this verse, Tim, very musical besides romantic. Hugs
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Date: 9/8/2016 6:40:00 PM
glad you rescued it. It was worth it, Tim.
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Date: 9/8/2016 5:37:00 PM
Oh so romantic Tim:-) You are the king of romance I am merely the queen of poop lol hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2016 3:26:00 PM
Lovely write, Tim. You do romance so well.....
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Date: 9/8/2016 3:17:00 PM
Such an exceptional beautiful romantic poem..I can reread it again and again..Still a fave.
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:53:00 PM
A beautiful poem well written I enjoyed reading it.I also found out today my poem won in the poetry contest,this is my first win The poem that won was Buttercup.I am so proud.Yea!
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Date: 9/8/2016 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful! Vividly done and touching.
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Date: 9/8/2016 7:48:00 AM
I always love when people write, or I write using "harvest moon", it seems so romantic..well done Tim love this one :)-luloo
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Date: 9/7/2016 10:31:00 PM
Was this fro your honeymoon? Sounds romantic!
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