Hand In Hand

Slowly we walk on the sandy white beach, hand in hand
A perfect Caribbean night, with sounds of the steel band 

A little kiss, a little hug, a little happiness from above
The two of us together in paradise sharing our deep love

Making memories on the first night of the rest of our life
That beautiful vision sent to save me, is now my wife

Playfully we both frolic in the surf, as the tide gently rolls
Not a care in the world, two free spirits baring their souls

The harvest moon is beaming high painting a perfect setting
Two lovers absorbed in each other, forever remembering



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:58 PM
If your poems ever collide with Eileen's poems, the world better watch out!!!! We will triple the population for sure!!! :)
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 10:52 PM
I like this verse, Tim, very musical besides romantic. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 6:40 PM
glad you rescued it. It was worth it, Tim.
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Oh so romantic Tim:-) You are the king of romance I am merely the queen of poop lol hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Lovely write, Tim. You do romance so well.....
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Such an exceptional beautiful romantic poem..I can reread it again and again..Still a fave.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 12:53 PM
A beautiful poem well written I enjoyed reading it.I also found out today my poem won in the poetry contest,this is my first win The poem that won was Buttercup.I am so proud.Yea!
Quigley Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful! Vividly done and touching.
Scars Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:48 AM
I always love when people write, or I write using "harvest moon", it seems so romantic..well done Tim love this one :)-luloo
Turner Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Was this fro your honeymoon? Sounds romantic!
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