Hamster

Hairy little rodent, Happily nibbling seeds. Hungry, he stuffs his cheeks, Hoarding food for later. Having rested all day, He now proceeds to play. Hear him now on his wheel. Kim Merryman 2/17/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 3/3/2017 3:23:00 PM

Kim, this is absolutely lovely, not keen on hamsters but like Pleiades, Roy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2017 7:44:00 PM

oh how CUTE. How did I miss your H pleiades for us, Kim? Love animal ones like this!

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 2:45:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I like to write a Pleiades to correspond with the letters of my contests to see if I can do it.

Old Buck

Date: 2/25/2017 1:10:00 PM

Kim: I feed the little "rodents" we call tree rats. No box to clean, no vet to call. Of course there's no little wheel to watch. :o) Thanks for sharing these moments with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 2:44:00 PM

Thank you for commenting, Old Buck!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/24/2017 2:48:00 PM

What a cute topic you chose for this lovely Pleiades, Kim, and how smoothly it flows! Warm regards // paul

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 5:03:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/24/2017 2:29:00 AM

And he is happy with the hamster wheel. Kai

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 5:03:00 PM

Thanks for commenting, Kai!

Judy Ball

Date: 2/19/2017 10:44:00 PM

I love hamsters. They are such playful little clowns and can get to be real little pets that sit on your hand. Many people don't know this but they were discovered in the 1950's and brought over here. They are Syrian Desert Mice. That's why salt any amount of salt will kill them. They already make an abundance of it in their system. Loved this. God Bless and thanks for stopping by my page. JB

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 5:02:00 PM

Thanks for stopping and commenting Judy! I never knew that about hamsters. How interesting! I had a few growing up but they never lived long. Maybe it was the popcorn we fed them. Now I feel terrible but no one told us about the salt.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2017 8:29:00 AM

aww this is cute I need to think of a good theme now:-) hugs Jan

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2017 4:47:00 PM

Ahh!! Must be a hamster..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sar

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sara and you're welcome!

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/17/2017 3:19:00 PM

I enjoyed your hamster pleiades, Kim! I think hamsters look hilarious when they stuff their cheeks full of food!! :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. Glad you enjoyed it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2017 3:09:00 PM

Hamsters are so cute and you capture their behavior delightfully here, Kim. Don't you wish all humans had to do was enjoy eating, playing and resting. The "wheels" of envy are turning. Lovely!

Kim Merryman
Date: 2/24/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn! Our pets certainly have an easy life.