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Hammock Dreams

Hanging bed of rope,
Buffeted by the warm breeze;
Swaying under stars.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:59 AM

You captured my favorite past-time.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:06 AM

You captured serene peace. DN

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:15 AM

Delicate peace on a hammock nicely described.............Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:32 AM

Amusing peace swaying in a hammock.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:21 PM

Peaceful scene, swaying in a hammock. Love E.

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 24, 2009 at 6:50 AM

Talk about peaceful...Relaxing and intoxicating..Lovely image here..GB, Tyesha

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:51 PM

Now we're talking, this is a lovely place to be. I enjoy swaying in the night. Tyler

Michaela Payne

March 23, 2009 at 7:33 PM

This makes me long for summer, laying in the hammock... this is wonderful so full of images. Amazing write. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 4:02 PM

Sounds relaxing.....nice

March 23, 2009 at 1:07 PM

Another peaceful poem from you. I sure could get into this. Sounds wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Jim Wilson

March 22, 2009 at 1:00 PM

Raul, this makes me want to take a nice relaxing, refreshing nap. Thanks.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 22, 2009 at 8:14 AM

Dear Raul, Thank-YOU for the trip to serenity and peace I'm falling to sleep in my Hammock now Superb tranquil Imagery Great Write ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter

March 22, 2009 at 7:31 AM

Wish I were swinging away in the warm breeze. Ah, such relaxing imagery. Raul, you are a genius. Thanks for a mini vacation. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

March 22, 2009 at 6:58 AM

Sounds like heaven!! ~ Divine! ~ Carrie

Deirdre Omaidin

March 22, 2009 at 5:01 AM

What imagery! Takes you into another world. Regards: Déirdre

Christopher Higgins

March 22, 2009 at 4:43 AM

This is ver well done brother...love the hanging bed...I can feel the warmth of the piece.

Lucinda Bulger

March 22, 2009 at 3:36 AM

sounds nice. :) thanks for sharing this peaceful write of yours...

Michael Jordan

March 22, 2009 at 2:07 AM

Good morning Raul - I see we share a very common interest for I am also one who loves the hammock and looking at the stars while I swing my cares away - It's good to read you again, God Bless - mj