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Hammock Dreams

Hanging bed of rope,
Buffeted by the warm breeze;
Swaying under stars.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:59:00 AM

You captured my favorite past-time.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:06:00 AM

You captured serene peace. DN

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:15:00 AM

Delicate peace on a hammock nicely described.............Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:32:00 AM

Amusing peace swaying in a hammock.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:21:00 PM

Peaceful scene, swaying in a hammock. Love E.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/24/2009 6:50:00 AM

Talk about peaceful...Relaxing and intoxicating..Lovely image here..GB, Tyesha

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:51:00 PM

Now we're talking, this is a lovely place to be. I enjoy swaying in the night. Tyler

Michaela Payne

Date: 3/23/2009 7:33:00 PM

This makes me long for summer, laying in the hammock... this is wonderful so full of images. Amazing write. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 4:02:00 PM

Sounds relaxing.....nice

Date: 3/23/2009 1:07:00 PM

Another peaceful poem from you. I sure could get into this. Sounds wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/22/2009 1:00:00 PM

Raul, this makes me want to take a nice relaxing, refreshing nap. Thanks.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/22/2009 8:14:00 AM

Dear Raul, Thank-YOU for the trip to serenity and peace I'm falling to sleep in my Hammock now Superb tranquil Imagery Great Write ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 7:31:00 AM

Wish I were swinging away in the warm breeze. Ah, such relaxing imagery. Raul, you are a genius. Thanks for a mini vacation. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/22/2009 6:58:00 AM

Sounds like heaven!! ~ Divine! ~ Carrie

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/22/2009 5:01:00 AM

What imagery! Takes you into another world. Regards: Déirdre

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/22/2009 4:43:00 AM

This is ver well done brother...love the hanging bed...I can feel the warmth of the piece.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/22/2009 3:36:00 AM

sounds nice. :) thanks for sharing this peaceful write of yours...

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/22/2009 2:07:00 AM

Good morning Raul - I see we share a very common interest for I am also one who loves the hammock and looking at the stars while I swing my cares away - It's good to read you again, God Bless - mj