Hamd's Haven In Hammam

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Hamb is a poetry form in praise of Allah.

Hammam is the bath in Arabic tradition, which cleans much more than just a sweaty body.

Both, such a bath and Universal beliefs are wonderful for my travelling soul.

Hamd in Hammam 

His or her word is everything resolved

Absolved enlightened entwined where

Mistress and master join in passion in

Birth and rebirth recant their solemn prayer


In every flower deed conviction praise

Nirvana even in the Turkish bath where


Harun and Hafeeza in separate chambers

Adhere to cleansing body mind and soul

Miraculous to every pore and purified

Mantra tantric to the highest order

A ceremonial purge in steam in heat and

Measurement of heaven haven Allah’s creed


13th February 2017

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Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 2:00:00 PM

Kai congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write