Paul Callus Poet Limerick

Halloween Witch

The witch said she found him so sweet
Then promised to make him complete
Her boast was no trick
As quick as a twick
Proceeded to give him a treat.


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A Halloween Inspired Limerick
Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin
© 27th October 2019
Used https://www.howmanysyllables.com/

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Angela Crabtree November 24, 2020 at 7:35 PM A cute write, Paul :) Paul Callus November 25, 2020 at 2:27 AM Thank you, Angela :) Regards // paul

Anil Deo January 23, 2020 at 11:57 AM I have stayed away from WITCHES until now. Since I already read the poems on either side of this one, at least twice, I had to enjoy my LIMERICK for dessert. Shalom shalom Paul. WRITE on Paul Callus January 24, 2020 at 2:39 PM So pleased that you enjoyed this humble Limerick, Anil. Thank you. Regards // paul

Anisha Dutta November 24, 2019 at 12:03 AM Enjoyed. Nice to read. Witch is witty. Paul Callus November 24, 2019 at 5:41 AM Thank you, Anisha. Pleased you enjoyed :) Regards // paul

Elaine Perrin November 7, 2019 at 9:06 AM Fabulous :-) x Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 4:11 PM "Fabulous" is more than I merit, Elaine...thank you! Regards // paul

Eve Roper November 7, 2019 at 1:43 AM Hahahaha.. nice one, Paul, good luck in the contest. Hugs Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 4:12 PM Thank you for reading and enjoying, Eve! Hope you have an enjoyable weekend, too. Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands November 6, 2019 at 11:16 PM Great one Paul!! :) Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 4:13 PM Many thanks, Heidi:) Best regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire November 6, 2019 at 3:02 PM Ah, if only some candy could make us feel "complete" now as it did when we were children, Paul. Your form and meter are perfect too. Hope you had some fun over Halloween! Hugs, Carolyn Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 4:41 PM Thank you for your lovely feedback, Carolyn. Most children over here look forward to Halloween, but I'm still trying to get to grips with it:) Hugs // paul

Jack Horne November 6, 2019 at 2:36 PM LOL, love your humour, my friend Paul Callus November 8, 2019 at 3:50 PM Thank you, Jack. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos November 4, 2019 at 11:47 AM Oh this is cute and funny, a bit of 'naughty', but so discreet. Loved your Limerick Paul. Hugs and warm regards, Jenny. Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:31 PM Your comment is exactly what I was after, Jenny...the word 'discreet' sums it all up. Thank you for your support, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Quoth Theraven November 3, 2019 at 8:30 PM Paul, I like this lovelorn witch. And wonder about that treat. I don't think it was Milk Duds. -Richard Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:29 PM ...and I like your pleasant comments, Rich...they come with a smile:) Thank you. Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie November 3, 2019 at 6:36 PM G'day Paul … appears the treat might create a few following problems - thanks Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:27 PM Thank you, Lindsay. My mum always used to tell me to beware of free treats :) Regards // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane November 3, 2019 at 9:06 AM Love your witty limerick. Hugs Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:23 PM Thank you for reading and liking, Cecilia. Hugs // paul

Carole Duet November 2, 2019 at 12:39 PM Uh huh...clever those witchy witches! Cute limerick ! hahaha :D Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:26 PM So glad to hear that lovely laugh, Carole:) Thank you for a lovely visit, my friend. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios November 2, 2019 at 4:47 AM I know it's past Halloween, but still loved the limerick Panagiota Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 2:24 PM Thank you, Panagiota. Pleased that you enjoyed. Regards // paul

Judy Ball October 31, 2019 at 2:23 PM Hmmmmm Treats from witches. Should he should or should he shouldn't. Great job here Paul. God Bless, JB Paul Callus October 31, 2019 at 2:34 PM A treat from a witch can never be taken lightly, Judy! I think our fella was not left with much choice:) Thank you for a lovely visit. Regards & blessings // paul

Supraja Kannan October 30, 2019 at 10:26 PM Ha ha... Such a fun and witty write. I enjoyed it... Good luck in the contest... Paul Callus October 31, 2019 at 10:57 AM So pleased this Limerick elicited a laugh, Supraja; thank you for reading, commenting and enjoying. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2019 at 5:12 PM Giving him a treat was better than making him a treat. Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 5:32 PM Hmmm..you play on words...interesting point:) Regards // paul

Winged Warrior October 30, 2019 at 9:50 AM A bewitching limerick Paul...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o) Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 10:52 AM Thank you, WW... regards // paul

Brenda Chiri October 30, 2019 at 1:25 AM Haha what a fun read that just skips along as the reader reads it! Amazing Paul loved it!;) Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 10:56 AM Thank you for another pleasant visit, Brenda; glad you had fun reading:) Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit October 28, 2019 at 5:40 AM A fun read and a treat..so well written, Paul. Paul Callus October 30, 2019 at 10:53 AM Thank you, Vijay. Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh October 27, 2019 at 10:16 PM Fun entry, Paul. Wish you well in the contest. Blessings to you, Gina Paul Callus October 29, 2019 at 6:38 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Regina;;;thank you. Regards // paul

Linda Milgate October 27, 2019 at 10:01 PM clever and fun, the best of Halloween Thank you for your comments for me poetry is often a release, but I so enjoy so many poems. Thank you. for the Treat. Paul Callus October 29, 2019 at 6:13 PM Thank you, Linda. Poetry can be more healing than many other things. Best regards // paul

Midnight Aurora October 27, 2019 at 5:18 PM Delightful limerick...He best beware. It is the season of the witch. Paul Callus October 29, 2019 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Midnight; I believe he is already bewitched! Regards // paul

Jan Allison October 27, 2019 at 5:12 PM lol Paul, a witty poem indeed:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus October 29, 2019 at 5:58 PM Thank you, Jan. I think others more daring than I could have come out with different versions! Hugs // paul

Alexis Y. October 27, 2019 at 4:59 PM Hi Paul, She had plans for him, he better beware! I wish you the best of luck in contest. Enjoy the rest of your my friend:-) Alexis Paul Callus October 29, 2019 at 5:56 PM I'd pass on the warning to him, Alexis, but I think it's already late in the day:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul