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Halloween Visitor

On Halloween just around midnight an eerie sound filled the night. As a clock nearby chimed out the hour, she prayed for daylight to a higher power. That morning, on a mission that couldn't wait, she gulped her coffee and cleaned her plate, grabbed a lantern and climbed the stair to the attic, if she dare. Cobwebs and dust did abound. For years no one had been around but this is from where came that sound; The source of it must be found. She knew what she was looking for; She packed it away years before. As she unwrapped many a treasure, one, in particular, gave her pleasure. She found it sitting behind a box and sure enough, she heard ticktock. Alive again was grandmother's clock but now a mystery to unlock. When she was little, she'd wind the spring which kept the old clock running but who had wound the spring this time that caused the clock to midnight chime? Could grandmother have visited that night to wind the clock and set it right? It's the only answer that came into her head. After all, Halloween is a day of the dead. October 17, 2015

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Date: 9/5/2017 12:44:00 PM
This was so much fun and we are around the corner for this time again. I love the play and mystery in this and I wanted to stop by and say Congrats too. Made me smile!
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations Janece
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on ur fine win with this superb poetry Janece!
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:01:00 PM
Janece, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:23:00 AM
A beautiful read here JANECE, your poem is a lot beautiful and excellent. May your life fills with unending bliss and abundance of grace Happy birthday my friend............A.M.
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/11/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi, for your kind words and good wishes. I am just now becoming acquainted with your poems and find them to be refreshing. I try to read each one several times as to not miss anything you have to say. hugs from your friend in poetry. Janece
Date: 11/6/2015 1:36:00 PM
Hi again, Jan. Saw here that you just had your birthday? Belated happy birthday! Good health, more blessings, more time with your loves ones, and the best that life can offer are my prayer for you! hugs!
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the birthday wishes and prayer for all things good. May God watch over you and your family always. hugs.
Date: 11/6/2015 11:56:00 AM
Hey Janece, stopped by for a visit and hoping you hade a wonderful Happy Birthday!! This is a great Halloween poem too! Be Blessed, Neva
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/6/2015 12:30:00 PM
Neva, thanks for the birthday wishes. Can you believe I'm still celbrating? Going to a dinner theatre tomorrow night with friends and to Palm Springs for several days this Wednesday. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs. Janece
Date: 11/4/2015 12:37:00 PM
Hi Janece, this Halloween was celebrated with a day of the dead parade. I like the story you share above, haha I love the creepy thought. Could it be? Enjoyed the mystery and ghostly feeling. Love LINDA
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/6/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, for your kind words and birthday wishes. I enjoy reading your poetry and your work is a great example for me. I learn a lot from poets like you. Love you back. Janece
Date: 10/29/2015 3:54:00 PM
SO MUCH FUN! We all have unexplained things come up and I love how you solved an odd noise here. Great that you got in both celebrations of Halloween AND Day of the Dead. All Hollowed Saints Day or think of our relative gone on to a greater glory, was a nice pause with this. Thank you for giving us some play in our day.
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/6/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for your positive thoughts, Edlynn. It was a lot of fun putting this Halloween story to rhyme. Glad you were entertained. Hugs. Janece
Date: 10/29/2015 11:40:00 AM
Goosebumps! We don't celebrate Halloween and I don't believe in ghosts so reading this was a bit iffy for me. Glad to see it's just a wee bit on the dark side...lol! Missed you too, my friend. Thanks for the reads. hugs!
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/6/2015 12:27:00 PM
Kim, so glad you think this poem is a little dark. I'm trying to get in touch with my dark side when it's called for. It doesn't come naturally to me. Lol. Hugs. Janece
Date: 10/28/2015 10:38:00 PM
This is a really good poem. I might have said this to another member just to motivate them, but I mean my words this time round. The story flows with a sweet natural force and ends with a nostalgic but thematic appropriateness. Allow me to print this and read it when my Muse is down. Will you? There's no middle ground in poetry - you are either a good poet or a poor one - Janece, you are an unputdownably good poet. You have your well-deserved 7+!
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Jan Terry
Date: 10/29/2015 10:27:00 AM
Hello, Hannington. Thank you for your encouragement and praise. I spent quite a bit of last night reading some of your poems, as well. I must say your poetry is quite addicting. Your poems are deep and beg to be read more than once. I really enjoyed them. I will have to keep visiting so I don't miss any gems. Hugs to you, my friend in poetry. Janece

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