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Halloween Tale - Nicholas Street Jail

The building is imposing and fearful, a death row,
it is heritage, but haunted and very creepy;
the gallows still remain and hundreds of unmarked graves.
But, knowing all this-  I took a dare on HALLOWEEN . . . 
I went to my bunk in a dark cell with no windows,
falling asleep, I dreamt I was being touched by hands;
and SCREAMED-  I saw a man walking slow and I followed.
H e l l o . . . !  He opened a door and stepped through, I did too-
It was dark, water dripped, then I saw the man hanging,
his neck broken, his eyes bulged and his mouth was smiling;
decomposed dead are crawling on the floor and walls.
I am fighting when hands tie the noose-   my body drops . . . 
In the mental ward-   hands hang me each night as I fight.

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October 7, 2017

Poetry/Free Verse/ Nicholas Street Jail
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9477-06-0
All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the Halloween Scare Contest
sponsor, Russell Sivey

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win with a scary poem.
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Again, well done BW.
Barden Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 9:54 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance - loved this - keep up the great writing! :-)
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Wonderful poem, wonderful win, wonderful person :) Congrats ... Hugs Eve ~`*
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 7:23 AM
The making of a great horror movie. About half way through this, outside the house, a pair of mating Sandhill Cranes started calling, gave me chill.
Parker Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Great twist at the end, very subtle in the mention of the mental ward...hope I read it right....very well written and should do very well
Muideen Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:49 PM
What a scary piece! This gem is penned eloquent
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 11:02 AM
A very spooky tale--dark and scary--apt for the subject matter--best for a win BW!
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