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Halloween Repulsive

One Halloween night I went for a coffee date, and what arrived was a ghostly white lizard thing; as I watched it approach me I lost my heart rate, when it reached me I jumped up as if on a spring. I ran home and was sure "it" was creeping behind, and I trembled thinking of that thing undefined; it was hideous, grotesque- not of humankind, I heard it slurp or was that my unconscious mind. ___________________________ October 26, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Halloween Repulsive Copyright Protected, ID 10-1297-990-26 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the standard contest, 8 lives of Spooky Rhyme sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 11/5/20 Second Place

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:24:00 PM
Great scene setting, Constance! I especially like the way your imagination ran wild with the perceived "slurp!" Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/11/2020 3:21:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations, and comment _Constance
Date: 11/7/2020 10:27:00 AM
Lovely piece of dark humour, Constance. Congratulations on your win. // Barry
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Date: 11/8/2020 6:58:00 AM
Barry, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, sadly it is almost true as I did go for coffee and the guy was real creepy _Constance
Date: 11/7/2020 1:08:00 AM
Haha, I bet you slept with the light on Constance. Congrats on your win, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:55:00 AM
Tom, thanks for the congrats, for sure the lights were on _Constance
Date: 11/6/2020 11:46:00 AM
Constance, a big CONGRATS on your win--love that last line! Janice
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:57:00 AM
Janice, thanks for the congrats and yes indeed that last line I penned is one creepy line _Constance
Date: 11/6/2020 11:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest ... scary, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:57:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations, comment and hugs _Constance
Date: 11/6/2020 11:00:00 AM
That's enough to make anyone take to their heels! :0 Delightful Halloween fun. Congratulations on your win. :) Evelyn
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:58:00 AM
Evelyn, thanks for the congratulations and the comment _Constance
Date: 11/5/2020 1:47:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky creative poem!
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Date: 11/6/2020 7:36:00 AM
Tania, thank you for that spooky contest and for my placement, gosh my poem is creepy _Constance
Date: 10/27/2020 6:25:00 AM
Spooky and repulsive indeed, Constance, you've got a splendid imagination:)
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:12:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the comment and compliment _Constance
Date: 10/26/2020 8:52:00 PM
Oh my !! If I saw a "ghostly white lizard thing" I would have been outta there in a flash. Yikes !! Creepy crawlers come out at night on Halloween. Indeed they do. This is spooky. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:14:00 AM
Brandy, thanks for the visit and comment, well it is sort of true, the coffee date guy was sickly pale with creepy skin and I did run away real fast, the rest is imagination _Constance

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