Balveen Cheema Poet Quatrain

Halloween Moon

Halloween Moon Crabs


A tide rises to leave behind hundreds of tossed colourful halloween moon crabs to stroll

Craving social connections like homeless souls furtively hunting their unsown roots

Celtic calendar hides matronly lunar freeing guised children and bodiless souls

Five more years for the halloween moon, till then crabby purple claws in orange suits 




October10, 2015
Contest: Halloween Moon
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Form: Quatrain

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Robert Lindley October 22, 2015 at 8:42 PM Congrats on your win !A7 Balveen Cheema October 22, 2015 at 8:51 PM Thank you so much Robert!

Connie Marcum Wong October 22, 2015 at 3:47 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win with this charming piece! Balveen Cheema October 22, 2015 at 5:09 AM Hi Connie! Such admiring eyes like yours are more than welcome! Thanks for your read! Love, Balveen

James Inman October 21, 2015 at 8:57 AM Nice write Balveen. Balveen Cheema October 21, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks James for visiting my page!

Michael Tor October 21, 2015 at 4:07 AM Balveen excellent write congratulations on your win. Balveen Cheema October 21, 2015 at 4:50 AM Thanks Michael! You are always so appreciative!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 21, 2015 at 12:34 AM Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Balveen! Balveen Cheema October 21, 2015 at 4:38 AM Thanks Upma for your encouraging words!

Eve Roper October 20, 2015 at 11:11 PM Balveen, congratulations on your wonderful win and thank you for participating in my contest. Eve Balveen Cheema October 21, 2015 at 4:49 AM Sorry! Pleasure ( had misspelt it) is entirely mine! Love your contests! Balveen Cheema October 20, 2015 at 11:17 PM Eve, the peasure is entirely mine! I more than enjoyed participating in your contest! Thanks for the congratulatory note! Love, Balveen

Viv Wigley October 20, 2015 at 11:10 PM Congrats on an elegant piece, balveen. Well done! Viv Balveen Cheema October 20, 2015 at 11:19 PM Hi Viv! Your stopping by and praiseworthy words have overwhelmed me! Thanks! Balveen

Jan Allison October 20, 2015 at 6:56 PM Having seen the Images on Silent one's poem I can relate to the wonderful imagery here Balveen - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Balveen Cheema October 20, 2015 at 10:07 PM Thanks Jan!

Sandra Haight October 20, 2015 at 4:55 PM Love your 'Halloween Moon' poem, Balveen. Congratulations on your nice 2nd Place win! Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema October 20, 2015 at 10:08 PM Sandra dear, thanks! Love, Balveen!

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2015 at 7:39 PM I really enjoyed that last line how you described the crabs in orange suits. So cute! Balveen Cheema October 18, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thanks Andrea!