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Halloween Moon

On frost chilled night twinkling stars wink through misty shrouds
as miniature monsters in drunken sugar trances carouse the twilight.
Good pious folk stay hidden with candy alms against the fright,
while the swollen Halloween moon whimsically grins down at such a sight.


10/08/15

Copyright © James Inman | Year Posted 2015

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Robert Lindley Date: 10/22/2015 8:48:00 PM Congrats on your win. A7 Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/23/2015 8:36:00 AM Thank you Robert.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/22/2015 12:47:00 AM Oh you did this so well James. Big Congrats on your win!#7 Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/23/2015 8:36:00 AM Thanks for the nice comment Connie.

Paul Callus Date: 10/21/2015 3:30:00 PM Hi James, you managed to put such a lot in just four lines! Love the imagery. Congrats on a most worthy win. // paul Login to Reply

Neva Romaine Date: 10/21/2015 2:37:00 PM Hey James, a hearty congratulations on your win in the contest! Great imagery and excellent storytelling. Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 2:39:00 PM Thank You Neva.

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/21/2015 11:37:00 AM A good one, James! Congratulations on your win. Janice Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 11:54:00 AM Thanks. Janice

Michael Tor Date: 10/21/2015 3:46:00 AM Nice James congrats on your win!!! Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:58:00 AM Thanks Michael.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/21/2015 12:07:00 AM Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write James! Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:57:00 AM Thanks Dr. Sharma.

Eve Roper Date: 10/20/2015 10:51:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!! James,thank you so very much for entering my contest. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:57:00 AM Thank you so much for hosting it, Eve. Really enjoyed this, and you've inspired some extremely clever and enjoyable poems.

Dan Cwiak Date: 10/20/2015 10:41:00 PM Truly a whimsical take on the theme. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:54:00 AM Thanks, Dan.

John Lawless Date: 10/20/2015 10:36:00 PM 'miniature monsters in drunken sugar trances"...best description of the little zombies ever!!! Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:52:00 AM Sorry, John. I hate it when these comments get mixed up. The one below was meant for Viv, but thanks for the great comment and, as per my comment on your sight, I loved yours as well.

Viv Wigley Date: 10/20/2015 10:34:00 PM ...and you did do well. Congrats, James! regards, Viv Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:53:00 AM ...and the same to you Sir with your wonderful poem (one of the more unique and clever ones in my opinion).

Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2015 5:54:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:42:00 AM Thank you Jan.

Sandra Haight Date: 10/20/2015 4:49:00 PM Love your 'Halloween Moon' poem, James. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:42:00 AM Thank you Sandra.

Viv Wigley Date: 10/18/2015 1:42:00 PM 'Drunken sugar trances'- great line, James. Captures the night so well, with a dose of cute. Good luck, you will do well. Regards, Viv Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/18/2015 2:44:00 PM Thanks Viv.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2015 4:30:00 PM You really turned it into a halloween moon by adding in the tiny monsters. CUTE one. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/21/2015 7:41:00 AM Thanks, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2015 4:29:00 PM Hey, my Disney friend!! How is it going? Let me read this poem now. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/8/2015 9:26:00 AM lovely imagery James good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Inman Date: 10/8/2015 10:10:00 AM Thanks, Jan