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Halloween Memories


      I was dressed as a witch for Halloween that year long ago,
And with my friends we were going from house to house;
            At that time kids could still do that without fear,
Our street was perfect for Halloween trick or treating fun.

      It was a hill with many cozy old homes some heritage,
They all had big covered porches and glowing windows;
            And all were nestled behind great ancient trees,
It was a memory I cherish, one of innocence and sweet joy.

      Sometimes, I was a princess, or a ghost, or a pirate,
And other times it was hard to tell exactly what I was;
            The leaves crunched under our feet; the air crisp,
Mother told us, "only go to houses that have Jack-O-Lanterns."

      "TRICK OR TREAT!" We would yell when the door opened,
But if the person said, "TRICK!" We would be so confused;
             When my bag got real heavy, I took my loot home,
And had a costume adjustment or even maybe a change.

      At the top of the hill was an old house; a haunted house,
It was dark and rundown and had a nasty black cat hissing;
            A real witch lived there; she ate little kids I was told,
Mother said, "don't be mean, she is just a lonely, old lady."

      I would like to tell you about the old lady who lived there,
But that is a whole different story, maybe another time;
           After the trick or treating, we examined all our treasures,
Our loot consisted of candy and chips, apples and other stuff.

      I gave mother the apples, she seemed to like them a lot,
My baby brother tried to eat all my candy but I hid them;
           Mother said, "don't eat it all at once!" (mother that is silly)
The next day, "oh mommy, my tummy hurts so bad, bad!"

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October 6, 2015


Poetry/Narrative/Halloween Memories
Copyright Protected, ID 15-714-933-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Happy Halloween, 
sponsor, Kelly Deschler

First Place
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Cervenka Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Lovely memories you shared. I always feel sad that some children never have this experience. congrats on the first place win. ~jan
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Jaycee, thank you so much for the comment and the congrats ~
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Wonderful memories, wonderfully expressed, BW. A heartfelt congratulations for your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Thank you so much Sandra ~
A  Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your Halloween win in Kelly's contest. SKAT
La France Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Skat ~
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October 31, 2015 at 8:00 AM
BW, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis 7
La France Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Alexis, thank you so much for the congrats ~
Gentry Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Congratulations! Love it! ~ Susan
La France Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Susan, appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:57 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Jan ~
Johnson Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:45 PM
congratulations on your win with this memory. I enjoyed the red. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Joyce, thanks for the visit and the congrats ~
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write Broken Wings, I enjoyed the read.~ Caryl
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Caryl for the congrats ~
Dutta Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Congrats to win the first place. Halloween Memories so nicely narrated Anisha Dutta
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Thanks Anisha, I am so thrilled with the first place win, wow ~
Deschler Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM
An excellent poem that brings back good memories and the nostalgia of Halloween... I enjoyed your poem very much, Broken Wings! Congratulations on a first place win!
La France Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Kelly, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am very honored ~
Inman Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Lovely memories, BW.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 3:43 PM
great entry for this contest. I have one very similar. Nice to know we had such similar customs!! How are you doing today, Constance? Have not chatted with you recently.
Leiser Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 3:38 PM
This is so sweet, BW, with wonderful childhood memories that I could easily relate to! I enjoyed your poem :)
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 12:00 PM
What wonderful memories - we never really celebrated Halloween when I was a child. On the Isle of Man it is called 'hop tu naa' Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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October 6, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Hello Broken, you have a beautiful and touching way in sharing with us, your most precious memories, no matter the need. Wishing you the best of luck. LINDA
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