Halloween Haiku

an eerie old house
                                   abode for disgruntled ghosts - 
                                           waits expectantly   

                                            halloween party
                                           by invitation only - 
                                        come at your own risk

                                       costumed guests arrive
                                      unaware of ghostly hosts -
                                            ignorance is bliss

                                          at the midnight hour
                                  the haunted house comes alive -
                                          lurking ghosts appear

                                        human screams abound
                                  ghoulish spirits shriek with glee -
                                            party in full swing

                                        silence greets the dawn - 
                                     shrieking spirits now at rest
                                      but where are the guests?





Kim Merryman  10/14/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/18/2013 10:37:00 PM
Kim, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:09:00 AM
It's really great to see all these golden oldies again. Congrats for your win!
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:06:00 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:01:00 PM
oooohhh, you made it into a murder mystery. Awesome work!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Kim
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:43:00 AM
congrats on your big win..and just where are the guests? Booooohaaa...BG
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Date: 10/31/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2011 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Kim. A great write
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Date: 10/30/2011 9:01:00 PM
Very Cool...congrats!
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congrats Kim on your first place with win these stunning Halloween Haikus luv.. honored to share placement with u...
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Date: 10/30/2011 6:14:00 PM
Hi Kim,.....congrats are in order, I see..How in the world did Poet Destroyer judge this very competitive contest? I would have been pulling my hair out. I think the strongest part of your haikus are the last lines of each one..a great pondering mischievous pause in each one. So playful and eerie. Congrats to you. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/30/2011 2:49:00 PM
KIM , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:37:00 PM
Oooh, Hauntingly delightful, Kim. If I come at my own risk should I bring my own poison or will the "ghoulish spirits" provider the beverages? Best wishes in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:29:00 AM
These haikus were great and the last one was funny
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Date: 10/21/2011 2:47:00 AM
Holy Toledo! This is a riot....Linda is gonna roll over laughing with this one. Just great, Kim. Good luck. Glad I stumbled upon this haiku series this morning over this warm fresh bowl of poetry soup!
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Date: 10/15/2011 3:14:00 AM
wonderful set of haiku! Good luck in the contest.
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