Halloween Haiku

an eerie old house
                                   abode for disgruntled ghosts - 
                                           waits expectantly   

                                            halloween party
                                           by invitation only - 
                                        come at your own risk

                                       costumed guests arrive
                                      unaware of ghostly hosts -
                                            ignorance is bliss

                                          at the midnight hour
                                  the haunted house comes alive -
                                          lurking ghosts appear

                                        human screams abound
                                  ghoulish spirits shriek with glee -
                                            party in full swing

                                        silence greets the dawn - 
                                     shrieking spirits now at rest
                                      but where are the guests?





Kim Merryman  10/14/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:37 PM
Kim, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM
It's really great to see all these golden oldies again. Congrats for your win!
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:01 PM
oooohhh, you made it into a murder mystery. Awesome work!Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Kim
Gorelick Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:43 AM
congrats on your big win..and just where are the guests? Booooohaaa...BG
Brown Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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October 30, 2011 at 10:42 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Kim. A great write
Ebbs Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 9:01 PM
Very Cool...congrats!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Congrats Kim on your first place with win these stunning Halloween Haikus luv.. honored to share placement with u...
Song Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 6:14 PM
Hi Kim,.....congrats are in order, I see..How in the world did Poet Destroyer judge this very competitive contest? I would have been pulling my hair out. I think the strongest part of your haikus are the last lines of each one..a great pondering mischievous pause in each one. So playful and eerie. Congrats to you. Gwendolen
A   Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 2:49 PM
KIM , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.
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October 22, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Oooh, Hauntingly delightful, Kim. If I come at my own risk should I bring my own poison or will the "ghoulish spirits" provider the beverages? Best wishes in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
Butterfly Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 7:29 AM
These haikus were great and the last one was funny
Song Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 2:47 AM
Holy Toledo! This is a riot....Linda is gonna roll over laughing with this one. Just great, Kim. Good luck. Glad I stumbled upon this haiku series this morning over this warm fresh bowl of poetry soup!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 3:14 AM
wonderful set of haiku! Good luck in the contest.
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