Jean Murray Poet Couplet

Halloween Dance

May I dance with you?  It's Hallowen.
The moon is blue and I love you.

Place your hand on my lower back.
Draw me to you, don't hold back.

I've always admired you from afar.
Trick or treat, it was time to meet.

There's something in the air tonight.
Somehow being with you feels right.

Although we hide behind our masks,
neither of us can deny the fact.

Your breath is hot against my neck.
I struggle to keep emotions in check.

Step outside now the dance had ended.
In the cool of night, our heat is suspended.

Until you decide it's time to bite.
On Halloween night... how exactly right.

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DM Babbit October 31, 2016 at 3:59 PM Nicely wielded. Congrats. Jean Murray October 31, 2016 at 4:27 PM Thank you DM.

Afzal Nusker October 31, 2016 at 11:55 AM A fabulous poem, Jean. Congratulations! Jean Murray October 31, 2016 at 12:52 PM Thank you Afzal.

Wendy Rycroft October 31, 2016 at 11:49 AM Congrats well-done great poem x Jean Murray October 31, 2016 at 12:52 PM Thank you Wendy.

Len Gasun October 31, 2016 at 11:08 AM Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Jean. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs! Jean Murray October 31, 2016 at 12:43 PM It's always a pleasure for me to enter these contests Galeo, and obviously an even bigger pleasure to wn a place. So, thank you.

Seosamh De Burca October 19, 2016 at 7:00 PM Almost a Gothic feel to your poem reminds me of the seductiveness in the old Dracula films. Great poem for Oiche Samhain. Jean Murray October 31, 2016 at 12:41 PM How apt that I sould be replying to this on Oiche Samhain Seosamh. I have so far had two little pople, one a witch and one tiny spidermnan.

Paloma P October 18, 2016 at 6:59 AM Feeling frisky, are ya? :) Would that be a trick or a treat?... Jean Murray October 18, 2016 at 9:41 AM I always feel frisky Paloma....don't you?

Daniel Turner October 17, 2016 at 9:33 AM ...and such a pretty neck, Jean:) Save me a nibble. Fun poem. Jean Murray October 17, 2016 at 10:05 AM Thank you Daniel.

Viv Wigley October 17, 2016 at 12:35 AM ....I can almost hear you whispering 'somebody help' as you try to escape his clutches, Jean. Fun write! Viv x Jean Murray October 17, 2016 at 3:20 AM But Viv... when one is in love, does one not crave to be possessed?

Arthur Vaso October 16, 2016 at 6:49 PM The prettiest of feathers, now there is Halloween riddle for you!! Loved this! Jean Murray October 17, 2016 at 3:17 AM I just had to sleep on it.. Jean Murray October 17, 2016 at 3:15 AM I get!! I get it!! Bird of Passion????????? Jean Murray October 16, 2016 at 7:01 PM Feathers? How did you guess I held a fan against the trousers of this man.....while we danced.

Nette Onclaud October 16, 2016 at 6:35 PM enjoyed this dance of eerie seduction, jean!..huggs Jean Murray October 16, 2016 at 6:47 PM Thank you Nette.

Casarah Nance October 16, 2016 at 6:31 PM Whew what a fantastic dance! I like that "the moon is blue and I love you" like the way you said it so matter-of-factly- very coool ;) Jean Murray October 16, 2016 at 6:46 PM Thank you Casarah. It was love before first bite.

Tim Smith October 16, 2016 at 6:30 PM He only wants a small bite...lol...love your vampire poem Jean Jean Murray October 16, 2016 at 6:44 PM He can dig as deep as he likes Tim.