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Halloween Dance

May I dance with you? It's Hallowen. The moon is blue and I love you. Place your hand on my lower back. Draw me to you, don't hold back. I've always admired you from afar. Trick or treat, it was time to meet. There's something in the air tonight. Somehow being with you feels right. Although we hide behind our masks, neither of us can deny the fact. Your breath is hot against my neck. I struggle to keep emotions in check. Step outside now the dance had ended. In the cool of night, our heat is suspended. Until you decide it's time to bite. On Halloween night... how exactly right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/31/2016 3:59:00 PM
Nicely wielded. Congrats.
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thank you DM.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:55:00 AM
A fabulous poem, Jean. Congratulations!
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Afzal.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:49:00 AM
Congrats well-done great poem x
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Wendy.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Jean. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 12:43:00 PM
It's always a pleasure for me to enter these contests Galeo, and obviously an even bigger pleasure to wn a place. So, thank you.
Date: 10/19/2016 7:00:00 PM
Almost a Gothic feel to your poem reminds me of the seductiveness in the old Dracula films. Great poem for Oiche Samhain.
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 12:41:00 PM
How apt that I sould be replying to this on Oiche Samhain Seosamh. I have so far had two little pople, one a witch and one tiny spidermnan.
Date: 10/18/2016 6:59:00 AM
Feeling frisky, are ya? :) Would that be a trick or a treat?...
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/18/2016 9:41:00 AM
I always feel frisky Paloma....don't you?
Date: 10/17/2016 9:33:00 AM
...and such a pretty neck, Jean:) Save me a nibble. Fun poem.
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/17/2016 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Daniel.
Date: 10/17/2016 12:35:00 AM
....I can almost hear you whispering 'somebody help' as you try to escape his clutches, Jean. Fun write! Viv x
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/17/2016 3:20:00 AM
But Viv... when one is in love, does one not crave to be possessed?
Date: 10/16/2016 6:49:00 PM
The prettiest of feathers, now there is Halloween riddle for you!! Loved this!
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/17/2016 3:17:00 AM
I just had to sleep on it..
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/17/2016 3:15:00 AM
I get!! I get it!! Bird of Passion?????????
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/16/2016 7:01:00 PM
Feathers? How did you guess I held a fan against the trousers of this man.....while we danced.
Date: 10/16/2016 6:35:00 PM
enjoyed this dance of eerie seduction, jean!..huggs
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/16/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 10/16/2016 6:31:00 PM
Whew what a fantastic dance! I like that "the moon is blue and I love you" like the way you said it so matter-of-factly- very coool ;)
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Date: 10/16/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Casarah. It was love before first bite.
Date: 10/16/2016 6:30:00 PM
He only wants a small bite...lol...love your vampire poem Jean
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/16/2016 6:44:00 PM
He can dig as deep as he likes Tim.

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