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Halloween Fire Spirits' Revival

HALLOWEEN FIRE SPIRITS’ REVIVAL Before building the fire We dug out a lawn square To keep the ash we knew would be there And stacked the sods near the pyre. The lawn fits back well – No ghost of last year’s flame. Each Halloween it’s the same – There is no grave hole to tell. Papers, cardboard, gasoline, - oh ! The hissing from a heap Of slippery wet leaves Like a snake’s last scream. Swarms of sparks stream In hot gas gusts to the eaves, Burning out as they leap, Falling as warm grey dust. Soot flakes like scattered crows Fly skyward, black and ragged From damp dead wood’s jagged Heat - soaked spars’ and oars’ Life-after-life in a final burst. Each deadened ember Sends a second soul To the lifeless hole With a final life to remember.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/20/2010 9:02:00 PM
Three cheers for winning he ocntest, stdney.. astounding piece! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/20/2010 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sydney
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Date: 11/20/2010 1:34:00 PM
Building a bonfire must have been a cool way to celebrate Halloween, Sydney. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:55:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. a perfect piece to express the theme... Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:30:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Sydney. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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