Halloween

The night of the witch
goodness blends within evil
doorstep innocence.

Pumpkin head alight
wandering the eerie streets
alley cat startled.

Bats doing their thing
every night of the year
Halloween sick day.

© Harry J Horsman  2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/10/2013 3:56:00 PM
nicely penned Harry...I see the Halloween sick day as kids eating too much of that yummy haul the night before...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:54:00 AM
congratulations harry nice yo see you once more on a winning list. xx
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win, harry
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:33:00 PM
Harry, it is cool to see this again on the winners list. BIG congrats.
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Date: 9/15/2010 11:59:00 PM
I assume Halloweeen sick day is indicative of the treats and excitement from children who over indulge! Smiles. What a capture...so much said in so few words with this wonderful Haku chain... Good luck for the contest, I wouldn't like to be the judge for this one with so many excellent entries! Keep your pen dancing, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 9/14/2010 2:08:00 PM
Injoyed this spooky Haiku, well written. Caryl
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:26:00 PM
Hey, what is this Hallween sick day? haha. Did you know "sick" is the new word for cool? I hope you meant it's a cool day. I think Halloween rocks! Like you little poem here too. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:41:00 AM
good luck in the contest with this spooky haiku
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Date: 9/8/2010 4:44:00 AM
Harry a unique approach to the contest, wish you well with your entry for Linda's Haiku contest.. :) Wilma
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Date: 9/8/2010 4:20:00 AM
Great trinity of Haiku , Harry , that capture the mood . Best of luck in the contest ...
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Date: 9/8/2010 3:05:00 AM
I sure am enjoying reading all these Halloween haiku through different perspectives, and this creative one is no exception Harry :)-- have to agree with Carolyn-- that second set of haiku captivated me, haha loved that it startled the cat! ;) Wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/8/2010 12:43:00 AM
Great use of imagery, Harry. Love the "pumpkin heads" and the startled cat. Indeed, there are innocents who arrive at our doorsteps and each Halloween I pray for their safety. Best wishes in the Halloween haiku contest! Love, Carolyn
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