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Halloween - Senryu

Halloween - Senryu

Death stands in silence
chaperone to innocence
craven beggary


©10/18/2017

submitted to – Halloween Senryu – Poetry contest

Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2017

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David Mohn Date: 10/25/2017 11:06:00 PM love your take on this John...congrats! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/24/2017 2:35:00 PM I like this senryu, John; the first line sets the eerie picture, the next two lines are food for thought. Congrats on your fine win. // paul Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 10/24/2017 8:35:00 AM Deep meaning in this one John, enjoyed. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2017 7:21:00 AM Congrats! <3 Kim Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/24/2017 5:44:00 AM creepy senyru dear John! thank you and congrats :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2017 3:38:00 PM Very well done, John. seems very senryu-like to me. Congrats. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 10/23/2017 11:05:00 AM Terrific piece John, congratulations... Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/23/2017 7:30:00 AM Back with congratulations :) xomo! Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 8:16:00 AM Great Senryu for more than just this contest, really fine work! That said, my best to you for the contest :) xomo! Login to Reply