Hallmark's Busy Day

Valentines consist of pleasant thoughts
They speak straight from the heart
Of cupids, arrows and turtle doves
And sweet love words that shout

From those who stutter or stumble their words 
with affection that can't be said
Such words that turn the brave to mush
can make the face turn red

We thank the ones the write the verse
and paint the cards sublime
They spell it out, without a doubt 
 to say "I'm glad you're mine!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Ah, Carrie, but you ARE a "gifted romantic." Thank you for your kind words on "Too Fast for Me." My father's death has been consuming me, but I find solace in writing. Still, I cry when I pass his portrait. Such a strong and loving man he was! Carolyn
Strand Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Have a happy Valenbtine's Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Carrie this poem is beautiful - Wonderful poem for a wonderful day - i just love this holiday - God Bless. MJ
Reynolds Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 2:49 AM
YAY! So sweet and lovef-illed Carrie! Now, go to the hallmark site, and look under the contests section....then go to "your parenthood finalists" and see my beautiful Daughter in all her glory as one of the 16 finalists - no joke, that's my girl! lol let me know what you think, love, me
Higgins Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:59 PM
This is very beautiful Carrie. The right words can be hard sometimes to express what one truly feels....so we need to thank the poets who write the love messages.
Guzzi Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:56 PM
We thank the ones who write the words, smooch, surely this is NOT a problem of yours! Light & Love and get crackin on a chair poem for me ..how about a stool in front of a dressing table??
Bingham Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Well said, I think they have a thankless profession, Hats off to those poets. Blessings, Ron
Guzzi Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:55 PM
We thank the ones who write the words, smooch, surely this is NOT a problem of yours! Light & Love and get crackin on a chair poem for me ..how about a stool in front of a dressing table??
Winter Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Wonderful Carrie! I so agree. I think I play a big part in keeping Hallmark in business. ~lol~ Your poem has put me in the Valentine's Day spirit! Enjoy the sweet holiday! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Gass Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:30 PM
What a perfectly lovely poem, Carrie. How true the sentiment. Another beauty from that wonderful pen of yours. Love, Robin
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