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Hallelujah, What a Savior

On that fateful day He went away, His disciples hid, full of fear and dismay. His family gazed through tear filled eyes, At the man non believers had despised. The veil rent in two, which man could not do, The sun was eclipsed when His time was due, The guard at the cross was filled with awe, As he realized finally, the son of God he saw. He was laid inside a gifted tomb that very day. Before the Sabbath time came into play. Sunday morn the women came to prepare, They found the stone rolled away, he was not there. He was not there but his grave clothes were, Folded neatly on the cold slab of his rest. Mary cried where is my Lord? Help me please, The "Gardener" said "Mary" and gave her ease. This revelation hit her very core, To the others this news she bore. Disbelief was her reward for this news, Until in haste to the tomb they flew. They now knew what he said was true, He had risen to save both me and you. He came among them in the upper room, To show he had left an empty tomb. He told them to remain in the city , He said to them, you must not depart. For when I go to my Father, I will send, The Holy Spirit to fill your heart. © Dave Timperley 20/04/2019

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Date: 5/11/2019 2:25:00 PM
What a wonderful piece Dave, setting forth the work of grace of the saviour. God bless you my friend!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 5/12/2019 4:50:00 AM
Thanks Gordon. God bless. D
Date: 5/11/2019 7:21:00 AM
God be praised and thanked for this poem of yours that exalts the Lord. God bless you.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 5/11/2019 9:34:00 AM
God be praised indeed, Beata. Thank you for commenting. God Bless. D.
Date: 5/10/2019 11:48:00 AM
Hello Dave Timperley, I have read this poem and i enjoyed it. As i read this poem i could see this scene.Have a nicew day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2019 5:50:00 PM
hello Dave Timperley, God Bless you. my friend.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 5/10/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. God bless. D
Date: 4/24/2019 6:14:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/25/2019 11:44:00 AM
many thanks for your comment, Kim. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/22/2019 3:14:00 AM
Ya, Pixie Dusr! Panagiota
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/22/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Panagiota. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 9:45:00 PM
A great poetic account of the miraculous events surrounding Christ's resurrection. Thank you, Dave.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/22/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Enjoy a blessed Easter. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 8:12:00 PM
A great poem, Dave, congratulation on POTD.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/23/2019 12:47:00 PM
Many thanks for your comment, Eve. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 5:44:00 PM
A very beautiful poem to share for Easter Dave. Congratulations on POTD! Easter Blessings. Aloha, Connie
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/22/2019 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Connie. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 3:14:00 PM
The title fits your words Perfectly!! Yes, Hallelujah, What a Savior!! My heart rejoices in this fact, that He died for all. Then He arose!! This is so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations Dave, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/22/2019 1:15:00 PM
Many thanks , Brandy. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 1:35:00 PM
- A wonderful Easter poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Dave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, It was one of those inspired poems . It was completed in about 20 minutes. I loved writing it. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 10:43:00 AM
What a delight to read your faith-filled poem on Easter Sunday Morning. Appropriate, but more than that - just wonderful writing. Congratulations!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:44:00 AM
Blessings and thanks for commenting
Date: 4/21/2019 10:30:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on your POTD!...Superb write Dave...Happy Easter endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thank you for your comments. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 10:17:00 AM
A truly great poem to be so honored on this holiday. Congratulations on this gleaming gem being awarded POTD!
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 8:25:00 AM
What a wonderful poem to read on Easter morning. Thank you, Dave. Congrats on POTD. Happy Easter, He has Risen! John
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:51:00 AM
Thank you John. He has Risen indeed ! God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 8:13:00 AM
What a perfect poem,for a most perfect Perfect day Congratulations and cheers! Panagiota May the Holy Spirit fill all hearts,
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:55:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Panagiota. God Bless. D.
Date: 4/21/2019 2:47:00 AM
No better poem to be honoured on this joyful day than this one Dave. Congratulations on POTD and a happy Easter to you. Tom.
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Dave Timperley
Date: 4/21/2019 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless. D.

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